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Anonymousover 14 years agoIt's not that I "liked" it except....
...that you need a helluva lot more practice in your writing. This was barely a footnote!
Anonymousover 14 years agoTerrible writing
This could have been a reasonably exciting story but for the fact that the writer doesn't know how to write English.
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