All Comments on 'College Boy Pt. 01'

by TattooedNTasty

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Unreservedly beautiful

So amazing how the author could bring together the emotions of taboo of two people already in love. Captures the the honest latent desire of so many mothers and sons.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

Wow!!......very hot. Please comtinue.

BroadusBroadusover 2 years ago

Good beginning depicting how each resist temptation and their growing desire, and then give in. Characters are good, writing restrained with no trash talking. Looking forward to next installment(s).

WhipmasterWhipmasterover 2 years ago

Off to a great start. I look forward to seeing more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

hurry with part 2 please

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 2 years ago

Superb, this will be a 'Classic'

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So . . . One of each or a split of pineapple and pepperoni on one pizza?

Good EVERYTHING !

whacky76whacky76over 2 years ago

Keep me cumming, err keep the chapters coming. Great start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Incredibly impressive for a first story. Very hot with an aching, teasung slowish build. Love ut when she says, "Do you want Mommy to help?" when taking his pants down.

Looking forward to more!

will_shakespearewill_shakespearealmost 2 years ago

This is shaping up to be pretty great even though the smut came quicker than expected. Very 'believable', enjoyable dialogue and scene-building.

sennodensennodenalmost 2 years ago

This has *a lot* of potential, can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good work up. Definitely waiting for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So beautifully written and so believable. It felt so real. Can't wait for part 2. Desperately want the son to get up close and personal with his mother's wet pussy. I want him to explore her with his tongue and enjoy her flavours and fluids as much as she enjoyed his. More please.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loving it so far keep going 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Loving it so far 5 stars

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I'm a 38yr old female who's been roleplaying for a long time and just started writing elit, a friend recommended that I share it here!

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