by Smutwriter238
You had every warning necessary for the bathroom scene, if you don't want a rape scene then don't read a story that's obviously going to have a rape scene.
Encntnt- thank you for reading! Glad you feel that way. I agonized over this chapter tbh.
Anon and anyone who shares their opinion- I'm sorry it was too much. Could my warning at the beginning be better? The story will probably avoid beats like this in the future, so I hope that helps.
I wait ever so impatiently for the next chapter. I hoping Cindy still punishes Sami. Sami needs reminded that Cindy owns him/her.
the first few paragraphs sorrta hinted at what was coming. You could have a clearer declaration at the start if you're woried about the truly clueless. Enjoyed the chapter, hints that Sami does have a bit a backbone in her and also hints at the changing relationshiop between her and Jaxx
I think this is one of the best written stories I've ever read on this site. Well-done!
Unbelievable story! I’ve been waiting for each new chapter like a man dying of thirst waits for his next drink of water! I can’t wait to see where this goes!!
Thank you so much for the comments and email feedback, all! I was very nervous about this episode, so I'm glad to see I haven't lost everyone, even if there's some split opinion.
I will promise you that this wasn't cruelty for cruelty's sake! It killed me to put Sami through this, but there is a point to it all!
If you didn't like this episode, you're in luck! Episode 11 is on the way, and no spoilers, but it's subtitle is "Natalie's Revenge."
I think I am enjoying reading this series as much as you are writing it! Each episode is written better than the last and I'm hooked to see where you take it next. I think the direction you have taken is perfect with it getting longer and more detailed each time. How you used the darkness to push Sami's development was so gripping. I cant wait for the next <3
The relationship dynamics between all of your characters are fascinating and completely unique. I’d read with all the sex removed just to see how they continue to evolve.
That said, it’s also sexy as fuck.
This is excellent the way Sami changing I can’t wait till she stops being Sam and becomes Sami full time
I’m waiting on baited breath for next installment
Really like the evolution of the relationship between Sami and Jaxx.
I hope Sami becomes his live in relief.
The only part of this series I have a problem with is aurora. The beginning of the story she was going to hang out with Sam but then didn’t then started treating Sam really shitty. Granted I can imagine my own little sniper where Jax talks to her about helping push Sam into being Sami but as it stands she seems more like she has BPD or is extremely by polar. Can you add just a small part where aurora explains to Sami why she has been acting psycho the whole semester. Other than that it’s great one of the best I’ve read on here over the years.
Thanks for every read, all! Sorry for the delay, but more is on the way.
Anon who said that they'd read without the sex, I consider that the highest compliment, it really meant a lot to see that!
Whitefox- I don't necessarily agree that needs outright exposition, but I will try to work something in for you! But it will only be when it serves the story :)
Come on Smutwriter238, please give us the next part. I am dying to read it further and imagine myself in place of Sami. I am in love with this series; it has an amazing content, where a straight girl is willing to make another guy a straight sissy(sissies are suppose to be girls). I love that part where she says come on we love dick, we love getting fucked.. cant wait for more. I have been coming on this page daily since last 15 days to expect a new story. Also, being a nerd, I have taken an average time.. author post new story and this time.. its been way long then that. lolz
You had me until you introduced the little cage. Really a big turnoff. So after a 5 rating you get a 1 and done.
That's a real shame! This is literally the only instance of a cage in the series. Sorry you won't read on.