All Comments on 'College Chronicles Ep. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Holy moly. Your writing is so good. The fact that it took so long to reach this point make the story so much better. Just asking if you could throw me some advice. I write stories, they are bad. What skill or what knowledge has inspired you to write the way you do?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's as if a new episode of your fav show is dropping

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Easily the BEST chapter yet! Missed Cindy but I’m sure she’ll be back soon. Really tho phenomenal work

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely stunning writing. Thank you so much for writing all of these, they're amazingly sexy, and easily my favorite stories on this website!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So freaking good!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I literally jump up and down with happiness whenever I check your page and see there’s a new chapter! This story means the world to me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please don`t stop writing this story. It`s so good! Take whatever time you need tho. Quality over quantity. But your writing is already amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I would love for Sammi to try to prove he’s not gay by fucking Natalie and see her response to his feeble attempts

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing story so far. I would love more with aurora.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm always excited for the next chapter but I'm sooooooo ready for ep 12!! Love you for writing this story thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Suggestion: Jaxx's attention for Natalie makes Samy jealous and proves to be a challenge for their friendship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Daily checking for ep 12...

Smutwriter238Smutwriter238over 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks everyone for the compliments, so glad you've liked 11!

Please don't hold your breath for 12- it's at least a couple weeks away. But I am on it!

We will DEF see more of Natalie + Jaxx, as well as Aurora! All in due time :).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Take your time! I’m still gonna check everyday but we all really appreciate the effort you put into each chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think this approach stated by the line "But some girls... Some make me work for it. I like them more." really makes the story very hot. The domination aspect of a girl who has a fight in her makes for very interesting scenarios. I believe this will also make other girls jealous of Nat which would lead to some interesting power dynamics.

nin_yulinnin_yulinover 1 year ago

Doing a reread while I wait for the next chapter and wow this one still is my favorite. The cross dressing, the way Sami is treated. Their first kiss (I think?) so special. And the writing is great! Wish there was a way to help support you!

Smutwriter238Smutwriter238over 1 year agoAuthor

It is their first kiss! Thank you for the support; your kind words mean more to me than anything!

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