by SwankyPeachBlossom
Quite nicely done! Keep writing, and I hope you get some Stars and a Hot label!
I liked your descriptions. They gave me a good mind picture as well as a feel for the participants. Thank you for the interesting, if short read. Please keep writing.
Five stars from me. A hot and sultry story with great descriptions of two horny people. Please keep writing and I'll keep stroking!