by DannyRae
plot is definetly interesting.. im looking forward for future chapters... please keep writing..
Definitely, please do continue.
If I may suggest though, another pair of eyes - an editor - would be very helpful to avoid missed words and other minor mistakes - 5* to start but the editor will help keep the stars flowing!
Please continue. You've started wonderfully and I would like it very much if you stayed with this story. This triangle is immensely interesting.
on some 4 real shit u gots ta finish 4 real sum good shit so ya...keep doin ya thing I think vi ash might end up but there is always option c
To good to stop, will be personally frustrated if you do.
Just when I thought it would be another mediocre story I got very entertained and hot
I really really appreciate you guys liking and commenting on my story. :]] If you haven't already noticed, there's a second chapter. I'm still looking for an editor!