All Comments on 'College Day 01'

by DannyRae

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please continue...........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
moreee

Please keep going , this story is wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
interesting

plot is definetly interesting.. im looking forward for future chapters... please keep writing..

SexoSudoryCalorSexoSudoryCaloralmost 11 years ago
Damn!!!

Please continue it. Like right now. :p

tygztygzalmost 11 years ago

Definitely, please do continue.

If I may suggest though, another pair of eyes - an editor - would be very helpful to avoid missed words and other minor mistakes - 5* to start but the editor will help keep the stars flowing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Yes please

Please continue. You've started wonderfully and I would like it very much if you stayed with this story. This triangle is immensely interesting.

Qui3t0n3Qui3t0n3almost 11 years ago
yo

on some 4 real shit u gots ta finish 4 real sum good shit so ya...keep doin ya thing I think vi ash might end up but there is always option c

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
continue please!!!!

To good to stop, will be personally frustrated if you do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot hot hot

Just when I thought it would be another mediocre story I got very entertained and hot

DannyRaeDannyRaeover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I really really appreciate you guys liking and commenting on my story. :]] If you haven't already noticed, there's a second chapter. I'm still looking for an editor!

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