All Comments on 'College Days Ch. 02'

This is becoming a great story. I really like the build up. I can't wait to read what happens next.

This is a beautiful love story. As this is my first comment, I think you can see how much I love it.

And some great internal monologue.

"Brain Overload. Have to simplify. Gotta pee."

Best line EVER.

make the actually sex as inevitable as possible; but also make it as minor as possible, too.

the most important thing is the real love and nurturing --- and, yes, goofiness --- among the siblings. as Jen said, the sex oughta be special, not only for Marky but for us the readers, too.

be careful, though, as many stories go down precipitously once the sex acts get started, because we, the readers, would simply say: Okay, so they engage in an orgy,,, big deal; that goes on all the time (in real life), so there's nothing special or unique about it,,,,

but having siblings exploring their conflicting emotions for one another as adults,,, now, that's erotic. it's also partly taboo, because they still have some (false) sense of propriety, morality, and/or ethical dilemma, etc.

yes, many --- if not most --- people can sleep with any one, stranger or whoever, without so much as wasting time blinking an eye, like dogs and chimps; but humans, some humans, agonize over decisions they can make (intellectually) but can not control (hormonally),,, and THAT is what makes good, erotic stories!

Thank you for an endearing story filled with little witty dialogues laced with half-jokes and half-seriouseness which baffle even the characters themselves; good job to you for your ability able to do that.

This has to be the best story I've read here. Can hardly wait to read more. Congratulations on writing such a cracking story.

Erotica?

At it's finest.

Taboo, yet not.

Fantasy? Certainly.

Very well done to date.

Extremely enjoyable reading.

Please... continue.

What a great story. 2nd chapter as good as the first

great work... can't wait for chapter 3!

very erotic, but also engrossing... the characters are wonderful, the dialog is very believable... all in all, an incredible start!

This is a beautiful, romantic story that is the most erotic story I may ever have read. Keep going!

Nookiehunter

Wonderful! I'll echo the other posters' comments. Keep it up, please!

This story is such a tease . . . another chapter, and still no sex!! I hope Chapter three will be ready soon!

i want to read about sex!...so intrigued the 3rd better be out soon...

This is by far the best story on the site, that goes for both stories 1 & 2, I hope 3 is in the works and I look forward to reading it. You have excellent literary skills and a very unique story. Kudos

I like the slow buildup, because the payoff is even better if one is invested in the characters. Looking forward to Pt. 3.

Like everyone else, can't wait for the next installment. Great job... leaves me wanting more and dizzy with where this will all end up with these great characters!

Extremely well written with terrific character developement. Pourty has a wonderful grasp on writing. Although this story is about incest, it is so much more. I was drawn in more by the romantic feelings than the inccestual/taboo ones. I look forward to the next installment of 'College Days'. This is one of the best stories I have read, on Literotica or elsewhere.

Extremely well written with terrific character developement. Pourty has a wonderful grasp on writing. Although this story is about incest, it is so much more. I was drawn in more by the romantic feelings than the incestual/taboo ones. I look forward to the next installment of 'College Days'. This is one of the best stories I have read, on Literotica or elsewhere.

i can't wait for the next chapters, it left me caring for the charcters and wanting to actually be one of them.

Hey that was an excellent story, go for ch. 04 cjh

I do not believe that I have read a better written erotic story. I hope you are not finished. Bravo.

well written, well paced, and well done. can't wait for the next installment.

As the last reviewer said... More! More! More please!!!!!!

First you leave us hanging, and now, we have to wait for the next chapter, tortured and tantalized! Please hurry! This story is incredible! Excellent writing. Wish I could give you a higher vote!

LOVE IT DUDE, BUT....YOU ARE A FUCKING TEASE.....I REALLY HATE STORIES LIKE THIS...UNREAL.....STOP IT RIGHT NOW

it seems a bit rushed verydoubtful a virgin would act that way or that fast. seems to me that after the first day and the incident in the bathroom he would do his best to avoid both of them. please keep atleast somewhat realistic and believable

DBRS

something rushed when after 2 chapters there has been no sex. Get off of it, it is a great story.

The silly spelling mistakes are fewer now. It's much easier to follow the dialog.

he really loves collete so his first time should be with HER not jen ruins the story.

bunch of horny folks so far... may be it will get interesting later on.. i just hope so