by aniceguy77
Even if you're into cuckolding, there has to be some level of respect and understanding between all parties, and that is not the case. Plus just ambushing the MC like this is dumb. You should have just gone complete ridiculous since none of the story is believable.
I like it, but be prepared for all the haters that will deluge you with abuse - it comes with the territory!
I was excepting more but it is still good.
This sucks and makes zero sense. You should give up writing and either get phycological help or end yourself.
Our lives diverge here. I was never chained as he is
I have kissed many clocks but never been hit.
Why he didn’t go to the kitchen to get a knife when Jenna revealed the cuckold reality for him - is beyond me. The wrestler has it coming.
Its a story, I get it. So I choose to end reading here
He is obviously a beta that can handle being 2nd place. I would draw the line once I was told I was going to raise his children. Actually I would have probably stopped it in the dining room once the mother told me to go take a walk with her.
This sissy “beta” boy haven’t seen “alphas” yet, he should visit a zoo for a look at male gorillas – those are indeed real men.
Vittorio Vittorossi
"Yes Jenna," I answered, "I would do anything for you. You know that. And if this is what it takes to be with you...then so be it!"
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That's it? She explains the situation and he just caves? I was hoping for several chapters of mounting pressure as he slowly comes to terms with it.
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I was already wary - "Beta" is alt-right bullshit, and had me expecting the story to go places I don't like, but this is the moment where it lost me.
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It's not that I dislike cuckold stories in general. I give them high ratings when they deserve it, including part 1 of this one. But nope - I'm outta here.