All Comments on 'College Roommates Ch. 01: An Introduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Awesome

I am not honestly into the gender fluid movement but you made it work. That was smoking and there wasnt even any sex! Can only imagine when there is! Cant wait to hear more from these roomies and Dominique's family. Its obvious they have some hot secrets. A resounding five stars !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
At last!!!

A story with gender fluid people, at last! I love it, and God only knows how long I've been waiting for that... Thanks :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

This was great. It can only get better after this. Thanks.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 8 years ago

"Gender fluidity" - I love it! The story has promise. However, the fluidity was stifled a bit by grammatical errors. Other than that, it's pretty good. Gotta go! Chapters 2,3, & 4 are out. Good reading awaits me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Gender Fluidity?

I know what it is but really? It shouldn't be a thing. You are either a guy or a girl. Good story though just maybe if it wasn't a guy or girl, pick one or the other.

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