All Comments on 'College with a Cane Pt. 01-03'

by Kot_Carson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good foundation....let's see more....

Hey Kot!

Who is Lucy??? You interchanged her name with Donna's all the way through..... important to either be a good proofreader or to ask/hire one...when the story is interesting context, spelling and grammar mistakes hinder the flow...

Very slow pace....which is not a bad thing... and hope the sex will be rearing it's beautiful head soon!! LOL

Keep up the good work!!

Kot_CarsonKot_Carsonover 13 years agoAuthor
Sorry about the name mixups

Hi everyone,

Thanks for your votes, it's awesome that I'm averaging around a 4.xx.

Anyway, I wanted to apologize for the name mixups here. I originally was using two different names for the main characters. I upgraded to the new Office 2011 for OS X and apparently the find-replace function does not quite work as well as it used to! If you see anybody with the name "Lucy", her name should be read as "Donna". You probably figured that out, but I just wanted to give a heads up.

The rest of the story won't have these issues, so don't worry.

Thanks again for voting :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
wtf

wtf??

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Who are the roommates?

One is Kura but is the other Donna (used most) or Lucy (used about 3 times).

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