by sr71plt
Really good story. I especially liked the ending. Very neat and satisfying.
How can you produce such great stories everyday. Thank you for all your HARD work.
I have to admit it is a good story and I kind of liked it, at least enough to finish. But the ending left a lot wanting and there is just not base to this and I can't see the way rob being treated as being healthy. During that time period whip lashes and assault like is described here would well be detriminal and most probably terminal. Then of course going from the native americans to the enemy and his tepreatment with such little medical help would definitely be detrimental. Not to mention I can't get my head around rob getting off when he had to be at least somewhat torn or ripped from his previous activities.