All Comments on 'Colton Stories - Gus and Adi Ch. 02'

An excellent addition to a great story line.

I'm curious as to the other side stories participants, but obviously will have to wait. Darn it.

74 y/o vet

Another great chapter! Looking for more, a great parallel storyline.

You have written the feelings and story of my past, and done so very well

‘Mom’, or any word, when used as a name is capitalized. If not a name, use small letters.

I love you, Mom. (Name)

Give it to my mom. (Not a name)

Come here, Jerk. (Name)

Quit being such a jerk. (Not a name)

Why did you switch from first person to third person in the new chapter? Quite frankly third person flows better but within one story you should pick one and stick with it.

I'm wondering when Gianna is going to show up on campus to try and stir up some drama for Gus and Adi.

I hope there’s more with these two. Kind of wondered if “she who will not be named”, will cause some problems.

started out great but no development .... its gets too gushy and repetitive in chapter 2