All Comments on 'Come'

You have the most delightful ways of painting a scene. Someone certainly IS a very lucky girl. I'm rather certain she knows it.

I commented this morning, don't know why it vanished along with my vote... but wow, Simon. This is wonderful. So much tension, strung out for such a long time. Interior monologue is supremely difficult to pull off this well. Beautiful, arousing, illuminating all at once.

This piece is... confusing. I love it. And I hate it. I hate it, and I keep coming back to read it again. And again. It leaves me shivery and frustrated and wet and very, very confused... which just compels me to read it again. I suppose that's what you're after, so congratulations, I guess... but... grrrrrrrr. Ouch. When I distance myself from it a bit, I know it is a very fine, evocative piece of wordsmithing. Well done. Occasionally it makes me want to give you a good smack... as I said, very evocative.

*Chuckles and nods head*

....and I have read it so many times. Each time I read it, it just moves me more.

would refrain from using the safe word. The desire to please, be subjugated, and completely relinquish control is so liberating I could never risk losing that feeling so I share her frustration. Delicious insight!

portrait of the power of imagination. For both the writer and the reader. Excellent! Thanks for this provocative read. A lovely way to start the day. Take care...

In the corner watching, and when I see you shudder I will free you.

I hate one page stories, but I think this was just right. I very much liked the style of writing, the details that further fired the imagination, and the final picture I was left with. I think it will be there for a while!

like a fine wine.