All Comments on 'Come and Rescue Me'

As we say in the UK, Wax's 'Slice of Life Stories' are the best thing since sliced bread. As always, Wax, a very enjoyable little tale. What with these SoL and your recent SF stories you're climbing to the top of the Lit tree.

I know this is just a slice of life story for you, but I would like to read more about Roz and ????. Maybe about ???? and her crazy ex. Or about Roz. Your slice of life characters are always intriguing and I could see you easily turning them into a longer story, or even into another series of stories. Yes, I keep referring to the other character as ????. Was not naming her intentional like no description of her was?

Once again, well done. Wish I could read more. As always, thank you for sharing it with us. Always happy to see your name come up on a new story.

Great little love story, just too short. I liked how it all came together and the student found her a bright spot in her life. Thanks

Thats quite some list Roz has going for her. Your slice of life are amongst my favourite of the genre's you write and this is right up there with the best. Now if you excuse me my mind is just playing out its own version of what happens next as I'm sure Roz and miss Kia car ( great cars BTW) get it on again

Thank you Wax wonderful, sexy and best strap on use I've read in ages

Jc

🏍️OK so it's not a Harley

🍔Best burger in town

🦵I would be weak at the knees too

🎡Mmmm kissing up here on the ferris wheel

🐼Roz the fluffy panda

You're right Lily. We don't know much about the narrator. She's just a college co-ed on her way through town. She doesn't even get a name. I suppose I do it so it's easier for people to put themselves in her shoes. If I describe her any farther than 'a gal with a busted radiator', I think it makes is tougher to imagine yourself in the same situation. And really, who wouldn't want to put themselves in the narrator's shoes for a day and onto the back of Roz's vintage bike? Even if it takes a breakdown to make it happen.

......... quick, erotic and romantic. Nice, sweet and horny in laypersons terms.

Sorry, but I`m a gonna side with the author .......... some stories have too much backstory and far too many characters in them ........... short and quick stories only need two people .......... well up to your usual standard Wax, loved the ever increasing list btw

I kind of like your short stories, they are much easier to read and I don't have to take more than one sitting to get through it, and it is usually a good story

Loved it! A nice simple romance. Not so much detail that I can’t let my imagination wander, but enough to get me drawn completely into their world. Thanks!

This is more like it but the build up and the srx was far too short as if it was edited.