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by PoisonPen33

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ScruffyOneScruffyOneover 2 years ago

The original version of CAYA has been one of my top three or so stories on Lit, and I’m very much looking forward to the rewrite.

Kosova_guyKosova_guyover 2 years ago

Loved the original version of CAYA. And very much looking forward to its evolution, and the first chapter is wonderful. you are a phenomenal writer. Excellent dialogue and character development. the only comment I would add is I sort of wish you had left both versions posted so we could compare them. But I understand the author's prerogative. Excellent work. thank you for sharing it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Much better!

Thanks for sharing

roveroneroveroneover 1 year ago

huh...guess Brenda really squirts when she gets off...love a woman that feels free to rub one out when no partner ....

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You ever have a friend who keeps saying, "you should write a sexy thriller" or "how about an erotic novella" or even "PORN! SIT DOWN AND GIVE US SOME PORN!" Well, I hope they're happy. I prefer longer stories with dialogue and personal connections for the sexy times. My le...

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