All Comments on 'Come As You Are Ch. 02'

Great rewrite so far! I hope the noxious Danny gets more of a comeuppance this time around, but time will tell.

Great work. Look forward to next chapter

Enjoying the story!

Hadn't read the original, so was a bit surprised to see in your changes that you'd decided to make Michelle and Andrew bf/gf, because there's a reference to Andrew being Michelle's fiance on p1 of Ch 1, so I'd taken them as engaged.