All Comments on 'Come Home with Us'

Good story!

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Wrong category, put it in erotic couplings. There's nothing romantic about it.

Technically not a romance, should have been in Group Sex. I realize it is considered by some to be sexy, but jerking off onto a woman’s face is degrading and doesn’t belong in a romance story.

Unusual, interesting… a bit syrupy but you can do that at Christmas. Thanks as always for writing. Let it Snow, let it Snow, let it Snow.

Not romantic you say? Romantic is as romantic does !

2 ... three ... or more ... we can always use the LOVE !

Sterling!

This is the height of romance and love. Don't let anybody tell you differently

Pure romance, well written.

It just kept getting better and better. Once again, I’ve found one tat needs more than 5 stars.

10*

Tc

Interesting. Mata Mata is the name of a particularly ugly South American turtle. They sit in shallow water and wait until a fish swims by whereupon they suddenly open their mouths creating a suction that draws the prey into the mouth, all in less than a blink of an eye.

Trionyx, that was the inspiration for the name. Started looking up various bizarre animals and came across that turtle. They're cool!

Truly a romance. Loved it. Wasn't sure if it was possible or would work out but it did. Well done.

"but jerking off onto a woman’s face is degrading and doesn’t belong in a romance"

To YOU it's degrading. To others it might be as well but if it gives my husband pleasure and I can make his knees week then fuck your degrading. Nothing makes me happier than knowing I can turn my husband to jelly. If more couples spent time trying to do that, there wouldn't be need for cheating and finding sex elsewhere.

Fuuuuuk! I'll never write something this... Wonderful. Thank you.

I came close to tears reading that.

I would say that it is a romance.

I loved it! Will more be forthcoming?

Chiefhal, not for these characters in particular, but I really like Pike Bridge as a setting and fully intend on doing a series there. And thank you all very much for the positive feedback and constructive criticism.

Beautiful Romance. Well done.

Well done. I love a good story, and erotic romance is probably my favorite genre.

Loved this story! Thanks for writing!

This is the kind of Christmas romance I can see myself revisiting every year. Unfortunately I missed it when you first published it, and am finding it only now. But hey, you did say, "Or... merry June, or whenever you're reading this". Beautifully written, sweet and sexy in equal measure. The sex scenes were panty drenching-ly hot (and a little cute). The three lovebirds were so endearing, I wanna hug them all. And you're absolutely right, what's Christmas without a little drama? xxx

Hah, thanks, Anonymous (posted 4/3/2023). June, April, Christmas, I'm just happy people are reading my stuff. And to you and everyone, thanks for the positive feedback! Merry... uh... Easter!

I loved this, my thanks for all the work you put into this.

05/23/23 Happy Memorial Day! I am adding this in my unofficial Christmas Anthology collection, which is ongoing and expanding.

I guess I am lucky about large Christmas celebrations, both my wife and myself came from large families. I can't imagine a Christmas Maria would have gone through. Which to my mind, wasn't a Christmas but an excuse to spew bile and hate at one's own children.

I don't think I have ever read a story about Christmas and a polyamorous relationship. I must say you handled this with grace, fun, and a hearty dose of love and respect. This is about third or fourth story I have read and you haven't let me down. Keep up the good work.

Maybe next time I can read your story in its expected season. <g>

5/29/23. Memorial Day. Christmas and it's feeling of goodwill and love can happen ANY day of the year. Felt good reading this today. You write darn good stories. Not just the sex/sexy scenes, but the wrap around story leading up to and leading away from, them.

Be good and please give us a lot more of yourself.

Wonderful story, sensitive, loving, and eventually so much fun. Thank you.

A truly wonderful story!!!