by LilyWaters
Exquisite ghost. Exquisite story, superb writing. Yep girl, you can write!
Really, rea!!y surprised that I read that to the end. Even more surprised that I enjoyed it. I had a girlfriend, fifty or so years ago, who was really into the spirit world. She scared me so much that I won't even look at a horoscope.
Thank you.
Tony
Good story but needs more proofreading. At least 5 mistakes. Takes away from the smoothness of the story....
This is a really good story. It didn’t sexually excite me in the same way as your last story but that isn’t a bad thing. I had to stop reading about half way because I got really emotional due to the subject matter. I always have a difficult time not putting myself into a story so it hit me harder than I expected. When I came back to the story a couple days later I was ready to enjoy the sexual aspect of the story. I don’t think I could have gotten aroused if I had forced myself to continue reading at my first attempt. But coming back to it was completely different. I was able to get completely aroused with very positive results. While my husband and I did not role play this story I did partially incorporate some of the elements into our next role play. I am sure that you do not want to her all of the sordid details but it involved a plethora of vibrators and no entry point was off limits.
Wonderful story of undying love. Thought it was a touch too sad until she went back to her city home and you revealed all.
This story was so beautiful it made me cry. Definitely one of the most well written stories I have read on here.