All Comments on 'Comforting A Killer'

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jw98jw98almost 16 years ago
Great Sick Premise! Well Done!

Original story line and could be followed up on with further development of Emily's deteriorating personal life. Really enjoyed the story. More please.

zex95966zex95966over 14 years ago
Detailed.

I love how much detail you put into each of there lives. both were believable and that is what makes a story really hot.

continue to write! =)

BaneBaneabout 14 years ago
Oh Boy

I still like this one as much now as I did the first time I read it, so many years ago. Nice work, all the way around!

Craig52Craig52almost 10 years ago
Excellent!!

Love this story. Love how Michael uses mind minipulation on Emily to become his sex slave and to do with her as he wishes as we know he will in the future. Emily surrendered to him completely.

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