All Comments on 'Comforting My Little Sister'

I’ve been trying to find this story for about six moths. Did every kind of search I could think of. I noticed it gone from my favorites couldn’t find it anywhere. Thanks for the repost. I haven’t had a chance to reread it yet but I will.

I liked it, but as a purveyor of things perverted I could have used more bro/sister sex or maybe better yet another chapter.

Way longer than it needed to be. The buildup wasn’t much of a buildup as it was getting very redundant. The sex at the end was very short. A lot of repetition.

The plus side the quality of writing was good but the story itself I would have shorten it a lot and put more sex in it. 3 stars.

I've probably read all of your stories and as well as the one's you've just recently reposted. I hope you're planning on some new stories soon. I do have you marked to follow

Most excellent!

One of my favourites is back, i missed this and several others of your work, i'm glad that you choose to repost them here on Lit.

Thank you for sharing your work with us.

8 this was a masterpiece when you first released it and it still is

Great work in pacing to build the suspense.

what a long journey the sibling took, before coming together. Yet another great story

I had forgotten about this story, thanks for reposting it. I wanted a chapter 2 after reading it originally and still think that.

I would still like you to repost the original version of “A weekend”, so we can compare them better. (I like the first version a great deal).

Thanks, and keep writing.

Excellent. I love tiny tits and bald pussies, the latter because I hate having hairs in my mouth. There's a French girl who lives around the corner, her tits wouldn't even come up to 'A' cup and I think that even my man-boobs are bigger than hers. Wishful thinking.

I really loved this story. I think that stories where you reach a Happy beginning that lets you feel hopeful for the couple are a great thing unfortunately they tend to leave you wanting to hear more about the couple and how they grow later after the end of the story

I like to read all kinds of stories on here but my favorite is the slow build up to the climax with lots of back story. You did a great job of building the characters and things they went through to get to where they consummate their love.

Last line ruined an otherwise solid story and made me regret spending time on what came before.

Didn't like this one. The dialogue was very over explanatory and unnatural. A bit too repetitive for my taste. A lot of the character interactions seemed a little far fetched and corny. I will be happy to never read about his pillow triangle again.

Your writing style is really clean and and clear, and you have a great way of depicting the environments of your story, but 7 and a half pages of build up for half a page of sex is a little long in the tooth.

This is the first of your reposted stories that I don’t recall reading before, as with all of your work it’s well written and sexy but the newness was the cherry on top. Looking forward to your next re-post, and hopefully something brand new in the not too distant future.

I really liked this story. Rules are meant to be broken / ignored (wearing clothes in bed, facing away from each other, etc.) If that had been my brother and me, his hand would have been under my panties early on. A finger teasing my butthole. His other hand playing with my nipples. And I’d have given him a hand job.

A great story. I enjoyed the buildup. It all felt like a natural progression (or as natural as incest can be). The dialog felt realistic and the overall story was happy and enjoyable. 5*

Well thought out story line - just a tad too verbose IMHO. But hey, I don’t really count .. lol. Thanks. I liked it 5 * worth.

You continue to impress me with your writing. This was a truly enjoyable story which showed the true nature of spousal abuse. Your characters Christopher and Michelle are realistic and believable. Each time I see your name, I look forward to reading your story. Thank you once again! K

I enjoyed this story quite a bit. To me it was a comfortable length with a nice build up and some twists. I don’t need wall to wall sex on every page, but that’s just me. It was interesting how you painted the parents , especially that ass-hat dad. Good work and thanks

The phone call with the telemarketer was one of the funniest scenes I've read on here. Well done!

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Good, good, so good.

Thank You.

Another of your great stories. Very happy to see it back. Also a lot of us like small breasts. RWL

Great story.

And now I’m going to be late to work. Good thing I’m in charge.

I fucking loved this! Thank you.

We loved this story , Loved the slow build , . You really described the smouldering love affair coming out , but still kept a will they they feel .

I am well into incest sister love ❤️ here at home . No secrets though here . We had parent approval from very early .

Different to the slow build in this story , probably why I love reading brother sister stories and the will they won't they story line .

Our sexy love making was just taken for granted type of love ❤️ . 10 years now and we still fuck every day .

Part two of this story would be fun to read , obviously more sex involved , parents to consider , new friends to not tell they are brother and sister , do they get found out or not .

Five stars from us *****

Thankyou from posting kisses 😘 x

Fuck - that was hot!! Chapter two please.

This was the second time that I have read this story. It pulled me in again as it was a real story, not a bunch of long drawn out sex scenes. There was real substance to it that kept me interested in what was going to happen next. I look forward to seeing more of your writings.

Wonderful story and beautifully written! Thanks.

Ok I like this story I hope you write a part 2,3,4,5,10. He should have gotten the pic back as well

More please???

Once again awesome!!!!

Loved the story thank you

The degree of care you put into your writing is evident each time. I appreciate you putting your stories back up and hope you continue writing for years.

Loved the first half. But got too repetitive and ended with a whimper. Still grateful for the first half, so thank you.

Great story. I would love to read more of these 2.

Good story. Loved the slow build up. Now I'm ready for part 2!

Absolutely loved this story. The love it portrays is amazing and it made for some very very horny thoughts. Brilliant :)

Another great story! Like the last one I read, a slow start, but one that built steadily enough, and had enough roller coaster lows and highs to keep me interested. 5*

Loved the story, although I couldn't help thinking that if Chris was smart he would have also encrypted the file with Michelle's sex pics in it, instead of just hiding it.

Even tho I liked this story for most of it I feel like there’s too much Jared here and not enough about the siblings. Obviously it’s your own story and all and. Your artistic choice but why are we dwelling on an abusive idiot for so long and actually helping him out? Should be obvious he isn’t worth thinking about and the fact she considered seeing him again was annoying writing tbh. Like the sister was spiting in the face of her brother who was helping her out and rebuild her life.. Personally i think how Jared used Michelle for sex and she just allowed it kinda ruined the vibe… dude was like 4 years older than her and by based on him being 22 and her 18 that meant she was like 16 when he was 20 and that’s kinda messed up and don’t know how that wasn’t illegal and Michelle’s parents weren’t calling the cops?? i think when ppl write bro sis stories they shouldn’t make the sister somebodies sex slave before hand… they whole thing just feels like a rebound and unclean. Sorry but that’s my advice for future writing.

Don't listen to Anonymous that wrote the comment before this one. You did your best to not make the story a cookie cutter bro/sis incest story. What Anonymous doesn't understand is the story was different because Jared was the McGuffin that pushed the sister to the brother in an evolving way and the relationship would not have existed or developed the same if it were not for Jared and his continuing harassment. I thought the concept was insightful and unique to this story. Often an ex-husband or boyfriend is the reason used, but they are not active as in your take on the bro/sis relationship, just someone in the past. Jared's acting out is what kept the dynamic changing in the sibling's relationship and I thought it was a masterstroke of plot maneuvering that kept the story from getting stale like so many of this specific genre do. Great job.

Good story but you leave me wanting more.

Several reasons why I only gave it three stars, the pictures couldn't have happened after she turned 18, since at the beginning you gave a timeline of Jared and she being a couple for a year and a half. No 22 year old is going to wait for a 17 year old to reach 18. I was hoping he would go to jail for posting underage porn. The story itself was much too long with very little erotic encounters, several pages of butt rubbing would have escalated much quicker. I stuck it out to the end but wanted more in the way of sex.

You lost me at Chapter 1; line 8. No guy has 8 small pillows on his bed

Another fine story which you have written. I really enjoy your writing style and your ideas for a story. Although I can guess how the story will end...it is how you get there that makes the story so much fun to read. Thanks again hope you are writing more.