by flashgordon562006
How can your balls be hitting your mothers ass if you were doing her doggie style? Your balls would be hitting her clit
When the mother has met someone else. It drives me wild when the mother and son decide to remain lovers forever.
became rushed and needs more mom son build up. This ending could have been in Chap 3.
The concept is Great. That being said this sounds more like a newspaper. I have not written anything, but I have read a lot and I know what I like. Try a little more embellishment. Try to get more feeling in it with the mother son taboo concept.
Either he has the longest, floppiest balls ever, or her ass is saggy af.
Also, it's "my mom and me" not "me and my mom" you always list yourself last. Unless you intended the son to have poor grammar.
I love it. I love to sleep with your mom. I don't have family so can you. Contact me mamtash96@gmail.com
To say that i had the hots for my mom would be an understatement.
My mom used to be in 80% of my jack off fantasies.
Just5 an average story there's not much to it reads like a child wrote this just a 3