All Comments on 'Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter Ch. 04'

The chapter ruined the series for me! Why you added another person into the mix I will never know!

The first 3 instalments were hot and sexy, I was aroused so much by them, the relationship building between Cindy and Mr Matthews was heated and the sex gave me enough of a push to have an orgasm.

The last chapter I hated because there was no need for this other character!

If you wrote another chapter, PLEASE DON’T ADD ANOTHER PERSON!

Great story, but it feels unfinished.

Agreed!!! Need more!!!

Need more parts!! Continue this amazing story please!

Great story. Should have gotten Kayla and Cindy together

That story from the start of the first one to now was so bloody hot wishing it does not stop here you have all of us on a roll could not stop reading them You do a great job of writing Thank you very much

Kayla got put in her place, but he should have really fucked Cindy too for being so jealous that would make it even hotter

So! Fucking! Hot!

HOT!

Next chapter, please.

In short, I loved it!! Kayla was so hesitant and then totally enjoyed being fucked and having a few orgasms. Great game to get the action going. Cindy felt left out, but she'll get Mr. Matthew's cock and some deep banging again for sure. The question is, "Will Debbie finally get inseminated too?" I hope so, and an unplanned orgy with the 2 girls, the mom and Mr. Matthews.. I'm voting for several more chapters to be written. You have a big fan base and most feel the same way. We love how you get them sucking and fucking. Keep up the good work. Really loved reading your story. More, please.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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you need to complete it by including the hot mom Debbie, also a threesome with Kayla would be great. but Debbie should never find out.

Great! Is there a new part?

Enjoyable, horny story. Do Kayla and Cindy get fucked in a threesome? When does Debbie get to ride into oblivion, she definitely wants to.

OMG……awesome. Keep going!

Super Geschichte

Würde ich auch gerne mal erleben

(11/6/2021) This was an enjoyable series, but it ended too soon with so many open possibilities. Will Cindy continue to see Mr. Matthews? Will Kayla make it a threesome or will she go back to Chad? What about Cindy's lonely mom? Will prudish hubby come to his senses? Will Mr. Matthews get really lucky and have all three women? Will Cindy's Aunt and cousin come to visit? Are her mom and aunt still looking for a baby daddy? Oh, sorry wrong story, but still? There could be so much more in-store for Mr. Matthews. Five stars from me.

New neighbors daughter was really hot 17 years old. We had a cookout and invited them also the daughter was hanging around me alone and I asked my wife Marie to watch and if nessary talk to her. This was after the 3rd time we had them over for cookouts. On of my coworkers Bill was 5 years younger than me but 8 years older than Michelle our neighbors daughter. He was flirting with her and I said bud you had better cool your jets. He didn't and sure enough Dan Michelle's dad caught them parking on lover's lane and beat the dumb ass putting him in the hospital. Dan told him that he had been jumped while fixing a flat tire. Or he would press charges against him for being with a minor. I told Bill that he was one lucky SOB and I hoped he learned a lesson.

Great series worthy of more episodes!Thanks.

where are the Pregnancy should be that he get's them Pregnant remember this was Both their first time they would not have Been on Birthcontrol

Fab set of stories, read them all. Absolutely sucking fucking wonderful red hot sex. What about chapters 5, 6, and 7 when he fucks Cindy her Mother and Kayla all together in a glorious orgy of multi orgasmic bliss, with the women all making out with each other as well. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Great story...5 stars!!!

Great series worthy of more episodes!

I liked the series would like a few more he has to get mom

Very fanciful and saucy. An exciting read. Time to catch up with the mother ...

great story will cindy be getting any lessons in anal I do hope so

good needs a Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter Ch. 06 house wife eddition

Will wait for chapter 5

great chapter, cant wait for the next chapters...

This is the best of the three chapters! There is a better sense of interaction in the emotional development in this one. A Five for the development!

Every so often I check back to see if you’ve updated this fabulous story. I’m dying to see how Cindy makes him pay.

Omg what would I not give to have been that lucky fucker. So absolutely red hot. I adore cunt especially hot young cunt. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Wonderful series, now need more, including the conquering of Debbie.

FANTASTIC I LOVE NEW LEGAL PUSSY

Still have not explored their butts and they are not pleasuring each other. Great action and description. thanks

Please sir, may I have another?

Great story stuck in my mind all day.

Was hoping to see debbie take mr matthews cock too.

Loved the story kept me leaking all the way through. When will we see more chapters?

I loved it. Please give continuation to the series. A threesome with Kayla and Cindy would be awesome; and don't forget Cindy's mom as well.

Had my cock in my hand the whole story, loved it.

Love it I really wanna see what happens next

2020 and still waiting for part five

Please come back!

This story Is perfect!

More dirty talking hard fuck please .... like fuck their brains out

excellent story hes a very lucky man. Cant wait for chapter 5 cindy has no right to be annoyed really but i guess shes only 18 i would probably react similiarly but he is single and she was messing around with lads so i say good on him hes not hurting anyone im 40 an female if i wasnt in a realtionship i wouldnt turn down a cute guy in his early 20s if the situation presented itself u only live once

Oh yeah.... chapter 5 is soon I hope

Excellent!

my jealousy side is triggered here lol

Its hard to imagine what it feels to be naked giving your body to an older man like this but unbelievably good as i know to well its so different as its not a guy your age just looking to ram his cock into you and empty his nuts but slower and with the right man you get to orgasm first and sometimes more

Please, at least don't let Cindy doing things with another boy any further chapter.

I know they weren't a couple, yet they still have a kinda a complicated relationship.

It's just my purely opinion, I just hate cu**ing scenes.

With all that sex did Debbie, Cindy or Kayla get knocked up?????

Great story! Is there another ending coming?

Continue this series! I discovered this awhile back and I hope it gets more entries and is eventually concluded.

Interesting serie. I'm really looking forward to the following chapters.

Well Cindy wasn't particularly well comforted in that chapter, Kayla appears to have enjoyed the lions share of the attention. I hope that you intend to progress this story with further chapters, trying to patch things up with Cindy, also furthering the action with Cindy's mother.

The whole series todate has been an enjoyable read.

This is my favourite chapter so far.

I hope you’ll do another chapter or two though. I want to see Debbie get drilled and a Cindy Kayla 3 way would be nice.

You could use a thesaurus though. Your descriptions are a bit repetitive.

This part deviated to much. Not impressive

Great continuation but there need to be at least a couple more chapters. One with Mr. Mathews and Debbie, then another with a threesome. Please don't let the story stop now.

...and what a great Game this was! Excellent Story, but I still miss the missing segment where Mr. Mathews, while continuing to fuck Cindy and Kayla (together with several more of their gorgeous 18-year-old girlfriends) finally gets to copiously fill Debbie, Cindy's Mom. with all the cock she can take. Thanx for the Great Read!

More chapters. I love this series. Maybe in the next chapters Cindy and Kayla become pregnant. I would really love to read this in future chapters if there will be any. Good luck and keep writing.

I can't wait to read more!

I loved this tory with the delectable teens Cindy and Kayla - it would be nice if mum Debby was to join in the fun in a future chapter!

Anymore stories?

I realise it's been 3 years, but is there likely to be a new chapter? Please?

I enjoy your writing and love the story line. Would love to read more about these characters.

enjoyed the story would have liked to see what happened after Mom came home.

I loved this story. One of my fantasies has been to be an instructor for young women at least 18 years old and are still virgins. Young pussy is like velvet inside and the last part of this fantasy is that their parents want them impregnated by me. Ejaculating fully into to them allows me, in the real world, to get a good stroke on. Ok, but it’s a fantasy and never would happen!!!

Would love to read a story having Cindy out of town and have Mr. Mathews screw the mom. Sounds like she needs it!

hope you continue this & cindy isnt upset with chris, just don't want it to end with him doing her friend.

Loved the whole series from start to finish. Fantasies are made from imagining scenes like these.

Good series. I enjoyed it, except! In just this last story alone, I would suggest that you do a word count on the word "pert". Subtract 1 from the total and that's how many times TOO many you used pert. Actually, in my opinion, as it is applied to "tits", the adjective "pert" is so over used as to have become all but invisible. Use of it at all, except in dialogue, is questionable at best. Pert has become such a cliche that you are apparently not even thinking about it. You used it to describe a breast that made its first appearance in a bra--a device designed to impart pertness to otherwise nonpert breasts. How would one know whether or not a breast was pert or not until it was ranging free! (The worst breast adjective? Ample! Not just driven into the ground, it never had proper meaning in the first place.) In general, pay more attention to your adjectives. E.g., Google--"pert synonym". It's not called creative writing for nothing. Sometimes, you use adjectives where none are needed. They leach strength from your meaning. Having once described something, e.g., with an adjective, no need to keep doing it and certainly not with the same adjective. It's called trusting your reader. Most of the time, it's stronger, more erotic for tits just to be tits.

so why didn't Cindy get Pregnant because she clearly wasn't on Birthcontrol would have added drama to the stories

This chapter has been my favorite so far. The game was a great twist and I am eager to see what comes next for Cindy and Mr. Matthews. Maybe a threesome with Cindy and Kayla?

I hope you continue with the story. I have really enjoyed it.

Nice job with a twist.

I loved it. Mr. M got his. Everyone is happy except cute little Cindy... boo-hoo-hoo,

Thanks for sharing.

You were right not to have Cindy and her mother together, teens are insanely jealous creatures and thats more rare than anything else written in Literotica.

I'm obsessed! Please write more!

Write a few more chapters, seducing Mom, and, may be, threesome with Mom and daughter.

Kanpur30

Anal Sex with the teenagers is always fun! Turning young, teenie-boppers into Anal whores is even MORE fun.

Try it, I bet you'll like it!

I sure have

(Hi, brookie, in case you're reading this, dear girl, know that I'm referring to you, sweetheart!)

LOL!

xo, -BB

plz wright more

So lusty - what a cum festive interaction - nothing left for all!

More. Let him take the mom. Married or not. Then the daughter and her friend for a threesome. Then all of them for one hell of an orgy

Need more... Lots and lots more. Fuck divorce. Get the mom alone then get the mom, cindy and her friend together

Wish I was him

love this story and i agree he should do cindys mom but like make it to where she gets divorced to clear his conscience . then after he has fucked the mom tell her that he came over to a party to make sure every girl was ok sum dudw was being a jerk he took care of the kid got drunk with cindy and kayla and fucked them both w/o protection now both girls r having his babies she understand and they all move in his house where he enjoys 3 bunnies daily and nightly 3:)

This was well written! So well that I skipped over proofreading errors was Really into the plot!!! We just need more chapters to see what twists and turns of the plot as yet unrevealed ????‽ 😎

loved the game, and the way he used it to get Kayla.....and she loved it, of course, the little slut!

Is there a fourth chapter coming ? If so is it possible to get Cindy and Debbie in a threesome with Chris and have the girls doing each other ? Keep up the good work and perhaps get your stories illustrated.

He needs to help Cindy with cleaning up the place. and Maybe doing both girls at once.

An unexpected chapter, but wonderfully imaginative. Hope you can bring back another Chapter, so your Guy can get to do Debbie, the neighbor's wife, and also to redo Cindy & her girlfriend together. Thanx for the Read.

Why not have a foursome with mother, daughter and Kayla

I loved the story and I hope there's more. I hope he gets to fuck Debbie and gets all three of them pregnant.

More chapters are needed, and Mojo has some great ideas!

Was an enjoyable read just a shame there isn't any more.

1, cindy pregnant with Mr Matthew's baby,

2, debbie wants Mr Matthew's as a secret lover and kayla desperately wants his cock.

3, cindy resides to hatch a plan to stay with him,

4, debbie finds out, not liking it, wants him as well only to find kayla turn up at his door with her bags and wants to move in as shes pregnant and her parents kicked her out.

5, onwards....... you get the idea were this is going....

I leave it up to you to carry on the storyline , good luck.

Thanks for the read.

i like the suggestions provided,

Cindy gets Mr.Matthew to fuck her mother- Debbie, and catches them fucking so she can control her....leading to to interesting scenes.

and Cindy gets gets pregnant, marries Mr. Mathews and they keep Debbie and Kayla as her pet sluts

This needs one or two more chapter, where Mr. Matthews gets Cindy, Debbie, and Kayla all three pregnant, at least twice or even three times each. Especially Kayla, whom he tamed, and practically fucked until she passed out. She needs to keep returning to Mr. Matthews until she winds up pregnant, several times. Keep up the good writing.

I agree with your commitments, almost as bad as the girl leaving before the climax. This is the nth time I have read this story and like Mr Matthews looking forward to the games end I live in hope that one day some of these writers reach their climax.

Why do people keep writing stories and never end them?? The writer could have made this a fantastic story with many more chapters, why stop here??