All Comments on 'Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter Ch. 04'

Loved the story, let's have a Chapter 4!

Most excellently written. Very explicit & erotic. I hope that more chapters are cumming !

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I thought Cindy loved Matthews and they'd have a romance and happily ever after . Looks like she was just using him for pleasure. That's why she doesn't mind Matthews fucking her friend at her house for the whole night

Not thrilled. Kinda gross for him to basically just toss Cindy aside for another girl. If there was more story to bring a resolution to that and bring them closer together afterwards then I wouldn't have a problem with it. As it is, it's pretty unsatisfying.

A but displeased that Cindy didn’t get more attention. Another chapter would be great. This time maybe Cindy and Kayla resolving any disappointment Cindy had about Kayla getting so much attention. Then he needs to do Cindy’s mom. That’s essential.

Love the story, can't wait for the next instalment to be out.

Just a horny old loser neighbor!!

Move on Cindy....many other sugar daddies out there

After fucking Kayla, Matthews asking Cindy if he can help her now.....great she refused second hand offerings!! Cindy needs a better old man, maybe Daddy

I don't think he tossed Cindy aside. Let's not forget she gets attention everywhere else and this could be a one time thing with Kayla

A good chapter, but not a good ending. The only proper ending was a threesome with both Cindy and Kayla.

Getting hotter and hotter, keep them cumming. Mother?

When’s the next chapter with Cindy?

Loved it, a wonderful story, it has the potential for a much longer tale, love to see o nice conclusion,

Need at least 3 more chapters, one with Kayla and Cindy with each one eating a hot creampie from the other one pussy, second one with Cindy's mom and the third one Cindy and Cindy's mom!!

Extremely hot! Please continue! We need to get the mom too

So you wrote it to where he pretty much seen someone he thought looked better and suddenly he was more into fucking her and making Cindy into a cuckold even after how he supposedly kept thinking and dreaming about Cindy what a bs way to take the story with such disrespect and make no mistake it was disrespecting to Cindy cause this was not a cuckold story originally you royaly fucked this up so much so that there is no way to fix it even if you were to write another story and wasn't Cindy the reason why he was so worried about fucking Debbie this fucking sucked and if it was real I would wanna hunt him down and kick his ass

Totally loved the story. Excellent depiction of the proper way to seduce a young woman and showing the results. I agree with the person who laid out the next 3 chapters needed involving the girls' mothers and taking the two girls together. I'm now a follower.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story except for one thing. The using of thick multiple times.

But it was a really good story.

To those who are saying this was a excellent story you don't have to suger coat it cause no man would agree

This is an amazingly hot story. @MFKanddragon i beg to differ to your critiques with these points of mine;

1. This man clearly stated that he has been cheated in love by his own beloved wife and has been without sex for a year, which us enough fir us to know that he has lost faith in true love and may just want to satusfy his sexual hunger.

2. He clearly tried resisting debbie because he still has some respects for her, not to mention that he almost fucked debbie had she not fallen asleep and her daughter back.

3. Also may i remind you that even though he felt attracted to kayla, cindy clearly encouraged him proberbly because she needed to be fucked in her friend's presence and was hoping to be the lucky one. It was a game after all and there has to be a winner and a loser.

4. Finally , they are all adults and clearly choose to play tge game knowing the consequences, i dont think your own ego would allow you to back out at that kind of offer if it where to be you. Of cause he has started the game knowing there would be consequences. Afterall, he was in no relationship with cindy. Cindy do have a boyfriend do not forget that. I think its a hot and sensual stories. They are mutually attracted to each other. He clearly helped cindy if you ask me

I do hope the writer continues though. I'm expecting more fun.

Great story I found myself dragged in with every sentence. I was really enjoying the first then the second third and fourth. There needs to be more chapters of this sexy tale

Can Mr. Matthews have a sexy hairy chest to please both Cindy and her mother? If he is to be her sexual instructor, imagine the joy of seeing his hairy chest, and her breasts stroking the hair on his chest! Feels great!

Great. Now will he end up with Cindy's mother? That would put it full circle.

Great story. Very well written. Need to have more chapters. Maybe a threesome with Cindy and Kayla?

Great story now we need to know about both girls in a threesome and another story with her mom them mom and daughter and of course mom daughter and the daughters friend

Great, exceptional! Pity there are no more?

I was hoping he performed anal on one or both of the girls. Maybe next time.

Will there be another chapter on this shame on u mr.matthews for not including Cindy would've been more xcitemnt for Kayla to see how u do Cindy as well then Cindy wouldn't have felt so hurt about all this

Sorry if is not over.you need to finish the story. What about Debbies the mom?he needs go do her at least once.and Cindy and Kayla?

Very hot series enjoyed it a lot. I agree with the comments that There should’ve been a threesome with Cindy and Kayla. And then Debbie comes home early and gets into the action. Fun fun fun.

This was a partial climactic ending to a pretty good story. Mom is still out there...

And I still wonder about the baby batter in the unprotected pussy's.

I would love to see if he and mom hook up, if mom leaves her husband and the mom and daughter hook up with him and they live happily ever after. The reason mom would screw him is when she travels to see him, she walks into his room to find him in bed with a partner from work. busted he agrees to all of her demands for a divorce and she does not feel bad for wanting to screw her neighbor...

This deserves a follow-up...

I had to smile while reading what an gentleman i wish such an neighbour :) and no no not fuck the mother was excellent story . Time for new ones

It was Great. I'm waiting for him to hook up with Cindy's mom, the story hinted that there was going to be some backdoor action, waiting for that too. Keep up the good writing, I'm rea1

Certainly enjoyed this erotic story. Disappointed that Debbie wasn't included in the final chapter, but Kayla was an added surprise. Really wonder how Cindy takes the result of the game. Does she go with the flow or does jealousy take over. I suspect we'll never know.

Really would enjoy more chapters in this story…. Hoping that Cindy learns to share, especially after she discovers all that cum he has pumped into her has gotten her pregnant, along with Kayla. The three of them would make a nice threesome.

It would also be interesting for her to plot to have him regularly fuck her mom too, so that she will not be quite so upset with her pregnant daughter when she herself winds up pregnant.

another good story not finished. a pity.

Hope Debbie is included eventually. Super hot stories so far!

Need to get the mom into it. Good bit with the daughter. Good bit with the bratty friend like the way you put her in her place can’t wait to read what’s next?

This DEFINITELY needs more chapters written...so many ways this can go...threesomes with Cindy and Kayla/Cindy and Debbie/foursome with all of them. Easily could be a harem story, Cindy brings more of her school friends...

Five Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💯

You should continue this. You are doing quite well so far. A lot of possible outcomes, but the one I'm pulling for is Cindy with him long term and 'approving' side dalliances.

I can't wait to see what you cum up with for the next chapter.

Chapter 5- Cindy and Kayla go to John Matthews' house every chance they have, and John Matthews continued to fuck them often pumping gallons of his hot, thick, cum and sperm deep inside of Cindy and Kayla. John accepts a new job making twice as much money in the city where Cindy and Kayla attend a university. The three continue to fuck often until the two young women graduate from college. They both move into John Matthew's home and quit taking birth control pills. John Matthews fucks Cindy and Kayla until they both are pregnant. They continue to fuck and have babies for many happy years.

looking forward to the next day hopefully a 3 some

The Best of the Best, 5 stars.

This is not erotica. It isn't erotic either. Is it, however porn. Take out the sex. Just have the guy (Mr. Matthews) talk to her about the "first time" - "birds and the bees" stuff for girls and guys, till her parents get back. Keep his dream monolog as a dream only. End it with her parents picking her up. He takes off to masturbate to a video of he and ex-wife. That is erotica, not porn.

Love this story don't stop now!

This was starting to be hot and interesting. Too bad the author stopped writing. Much better than most things on "Lit". Hope you finish it someday. At least a five!

Loved this

Shame he never had the mother as well

IT's been about six years since the author wrote the latest chapter. Mathews has still not gone back to help clean up the party mess and to make amends to Cindy. I hope he does soon!

More please