All Comments on 'Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter'

great story......can't wait for rest of stories which, i'm sure will include her mother.....and more..........

Hot story and great fantasy but the lead character is an idiot for taking the chance. I feel sorry for the young lady who needs the help but from someone more responsible.

Thank you that was a great story bad about running out of time glad to see you have another to read

Love your story!

Great story, I see part 2 is posted, excellent!

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love how innocent and submissive she is!!

Nice build up. Keep going.

Nice story to me because I have a blonde 19 year old who lives next door. what bothers me is that he fucked his blonde neighbor without a condom knowing she could very well get pregnant because of the load of cum he deposited into her almost virgin pussy. It would be a shame if she did indeed get pregnant. Hopefully not but he should at least try to get her to get a next day pill to make sure. This will make me dream of my beautiful natural blonde 19 yr old neighbor. Maybe???

Excellent story, well-written and very sexy. Git my blood flowing. Would have been better if he instructed her on how to put a condom on, also better to have safe sex.

It's definitely his fault his wife left him.

Granted that this is just a story, Ill not go in to details of how this "should" or "could" have happened. What I take from this is a is just horny widower taking advantage of a young lady, who is clearly confused and needing attention, and whom he had fantasized about. I gave you 2 stars just because of my personal tastes. I mean, in the kitchen? In the long run, I feel this man did just as much damage as those"boys" did to her.

@JadaVersailles, yes, she's so innocent and so accepting of him, so wanting him to thrust his rod deep inside her.

He 'educates' her on what's expected of men and she quickly learns how to please him... and the other guys she will date.

It must've been a big thrill for him to fill her sweet innocent pussy with his sperms. She likely didn't think about the possibility of conceiving. All she wanted was to feel his manly spermy cum explode deep into the depths of her innocence...

Wonderful how he not only filled her up with his seed, but got her cumming for the third time as he did. Now Cindy will never tolerate a lover wearing a condom so she can feel their hot spunk filling her up. Now he needs to fill mommy Debbie up with his potent sperm. Women can’t seem to keep their mouths shut, so he’ll undoubtedly have to break in Cindy’s teen friends and service Debbie’s social circles.

Incredible story and great quality! Impressive

Technically nice but he should have addressed her emotions more to show her the difference between a hungry teen and a patient adult.

ok!...

The comments make me laugh.

It's a fantasy, a story and people are in a knot over condoms not being worn.

It's not real guys. 5 stars, great story.

seemed a bit on the taking advantage too much.

if she had been an ebony teen then the story would have been perfect. I love young ebony pussy.

If it were laid on a plate-like that for real anyone would've had a go.

Very hot. Love picturing her bent over the table

Nice! I do enjoy young and old. Very tasteful and just the right amount of playfulness. I'm sure Cindy came back for more before the summer was over 😉

I feel a mature gentleman would have taken the time to lick her exposed sex from behind before?

ok.

You can definitely be at fault when your spouse cheats on you. Neglect can make your spouse look for someone else to feel wanted again.

Too quick!

Jail time for sure…

Well thought out. Well written. Effective for Literotica designed to get people heated up.

All would suggest a 5.

I hated it. A man effectively took advantage of a young stressed lady, for his own selfish purposes. It sounded like rape to me.

Yuck. Wish I could have give it a negative 10. NO wonder he was no longer married. A real pig.

I prefer writers who say: This is my theme, if that offends you, don't read.

Good premise.

Great story.

Sex moved ahead too fast, though.

Needed more foreplay before hot and heavy sex. With dialog. Does this feel good? Tell me what you'd like.

Nevertheless, five stars.

i love young pussy...

Great story.

Been there.

Done that.

I approve.

This was so fucking hot

I loved everything about it

When he. said that after her skirt fell down and covered her smooth shaved pussy and that he could still smell her sweet arouma of her young eighteen year old pussy,,my cock was rock hard just from thinking about it

I only had to stroke my cock once and I shot my load all over the floor

Young pussy is my favorite arouma in the world

I love the smell of young pussy

Fucking awesome - loved it. Every 40 year old guys fantasy

That’s great story

I honestly love it when older guy take his time and lick my pussy and finger it wet before fucking me and stretching my pussy with his big dick

I cant tell if this is a fantasy youve had or if it happened. Good story 👌

I liked this. I hope that teaching gets some kinky aspects in next chapters

Awfully glad this is a series! Absolutely great story with plenty of build up and truly loving gentle sex. A well thought out and written story. Look forward to reading the next chapter. I would love to see more stories on your list! I thank you and your Muse for sharing your vision and talents.

Great storey... loved it

I liked this, but something that kept distracting me was the repetitiveness of the word 'pussy'. If you used other words sometimes or didn't directly refer to it the words would flow more. Twice in one sentence is too much, especially surrounded by more sentences with it in them. You don't have to go all 'love canal' but could say, the hot tight feeling of her, instead of her pussy, I could feel her muscles squeezing instead of her pussy squeezing.

Great story would love to read more as the chapters progress…

I was taken by a neighbor and contined

I would LOVE to have a Yummy little neighbor like that as sadly they are all old nasty bits who are unhappy and make their own hubbys miserable

Personally I thought the story was great. I am an older woman who has never had the pleasure of a lesbian experience.I would love to find a hot 18 year old girl to lick her tits. And then her fresh young pussy. And her stick her tongue deep in mine. I might even want my husband to partake. But I get her slut pussy first.

stroker...

Five srars she is one hot Cunt

Fantastic! Well done. I look forward to reading about more of their trysts :)

Great story! ...regardless of all the haters. Your story made me wet and when I returned home to my husband, he reaped the benefits! Now PEOPLE it is a story. PLEASE go elsewhere with your poor rules on life. YOUR LIVES MUST TRULEY BE HORRIBLE!! EVERY WOMEN has always wanted an older man to take them. I relived my own experience while reading this story of when my neighbor allowed me to be "The Seducer" and take him. I was not a virgin. I had been with too many "little boys". When I decided to to take my neighbor, who was, and always has been, a gentleman, he made me feel sooooo much like a woman. I was 18 but had lived next door to them for 5 years. He and his wife had watched me "mature". He wife taught me how to wear makeup so that no one knew I had makeup on. My mom tried but Cortney took her time and explained "why". I babysat their 3 children. Spent the night when they were out late and took care of the kiddos in the morning. NEVER did he push himself on me. I spoke to Cortney about my poor and frustrated times with boyfriends. She always told me that she was lucky that she had the opportunity to be with someone older who took their time and waited for her to be ready. The more I write, the more I believe she actually set her husband up for me. I guess that makes me love them both even more. Now married myself, with my own kiddos, we are all still great friends. My parents still live next door and when we get together, great memories come rushing back. Picnics and holidays have always included everyone. As for my kiddos, soon to be teenagers, I hope that we have raised them well so that they know to ENJOY the development of their sexual appetites.

I only need two words: REALLY HOT !!!

Neighbour’s daughter or better friend’s sexy, seductive, young daughter can be fucked with utmost pleasures and infinite lust. T, a friend’s daughter ignites fire in my loin, her very thoughts give me instant erection, the hard long thick hot throbbing cock wants to enter her tight pussy again and again. OMG 💃💃

First rate. Looking forward to the continuation!

WHERE DIS U SAY U LIVED?

I thought it was an Interesting Story, a guy who is possibly in his Late 30's or Early 40's who is desperate to get some by making love with his Neighbor's Daughter behind her Parents Back.

Imagine if you did a 5th Story like an Epilogue, like where Cindy & Robert confess their Love for each other to Cindy's Parents, throughout College they date and afterwards they have a few Kids of their Own. !!!

I thought that this was an interesting Story, a guy in his Late 30's or Early 40's who is desperate to get some and feel alive by making Love with his Neighbor's Daughter.

Imagine if you did another story or 2 like including them going somewhere like the Beach and Robert drools all over Cindy in a White or Hot Pink Bikini.

Also that Cindy confesses to her Parents that she loves Robert with all her Heart and they accept. After High School they become a Couple, throughout her time at College they date and later they get Married and start to have a Family with a few Kids of their own. !!!

nice story

Sorry I found this distasteful and an abuse of power taking advantage of a young girl. It is no wonder women are wary of men who can only think of their own gratification.

Must be American!

Very hot. It’s always amazing and sexy when a man takes advantage of a woman and makes her his slut. Loved it. Would have loved for him to fuck her ass also.

Hot, does she not realize what she really is to him, just a tight hole to use. I felt like that reading it

When i was 18 i loved how older men relished in fucking me. I enjoyed how he took his time and really enjoyed her body.

Lovely story how he restored her confidence in men and learned the joys of sex well taught.

Wow!! Great Story!!

A very endearing and sensual story. It's nice how he comforted her, then taught her how sex is really to be enjoyed.

YUMMY..!! Excellent story..!!

Overall, quite, uh, entertaining. And also kinda hot. But if the girl was truly burned by a bad first experience, he needed to slow things down and not skip so many steps. Forcing her legs apart? Bad move dude. What about some heavy kissing and exploring her exogenous zones? Maybe a little edging? Then let her explore his body, his hot zones? To go directly from her first orgasm to stuffing his cock in her mouth is pretty lame. Let her feel his chest hair, his muscles, his legs, and then hesitantly touching his rod. Then gently stroking it, sliding her hands around the tip, lightly sliding down the soft skin of his length, getting comfortable with that and then learning to give a hand job and get comfortable with the sight, the small and the feel of his equipment. Getting a bit lost in finding her way around his body as he continued to stroke, suck and lick her to keep her aroused. Instead, he took a few minutes to massage her shoulders, a kiss on the neck, a few licks on her breasts, a few on her clit, shoving his fingers into her, and off we go. Then she owes him a blow job? What a creepy wanker.

MMmmm,... Author used lots of info to update us all..!!!! Thank you..!!!

Great story every as fantasy reminded me of when exgf Lil sisters hoped up at my door flirting with e

Mmmmmm fuck yes. I imagined that was me. You just taking what you want. My tight little pussy getting fucked hard by your huge cock. Mmmmm x

Mmmmmm fuck yes. I imagined that was me. You just taking what you want. My tight little pussy getting fucked hard by your huge cock. Mmmmm x

Excellently written. Extremely erotic. It is the duty of all "older" men to teach young women how to have great sex. I would have eaten her pussy before fucking her though. The time constraint of having to watch the clock was a good subtle pressure, raising the tension, to move things along. This story could be expanded into a novella showing the further adventures of Cindy & Mr. Mattews as he teaches her more & more with each of their further encounters. Ten chapters & 2000 words could be written easy.

Its awesome. I felt kinda jealous..

@BobbyMike. Agree, young women (of all ages, actually) should take proper precautions, to protect themselves. In my many unpublished stories (or story parts), I bring-up lack of protection as the naive virgin Christian women, preparing to give their good-girl virginities and Christian innocences to the "bad boys" or nonChristian men they see, rarely consider the long-term effects of their men spurting their potent seed deep into their utterly unprotected pussies, which sooo wanna be fucked....

I agree... Nice story, lots of potential, but moved too fast... Should've stopped after the oral on her, then let her bask in it, hug her, kiss her, lie with her naked, let her discover at her own pace. Then have her return later for more...

Great story.

Taking her in, yes. Letting her talk, yes. Even holding her, yes. But forcing himself on her using the excuse that sex can be joyfuL without her asking or consent? NO. Gave it a 3for good writing, On second thought, that's too high..

Excellent! I wish the parents had been delayed more.

Definitely a male fantasy if someone started touching a young lady like this I’d assume she would freeze up any consent isn’t fair cause he’s known her for awhile so he’s just a groomer

Essentially perfect all around. This will still stands as the best of the series.

Good story, well told. Well written.

Good writing doesn't make up for your older male character being a pig. It seems more likely that the young girls, (was Cindy really 18?), reactions were the pigs made up fantasies to justify his dispicable behavior ignoring her protests and cries of NO and STOP. Here's a better ending: Cindy opened the door and rushed into her mother's arms, sobbing out what had happened to her. Her father's rage was instant as he stepped through the doorway and slammed the pig's head into the table the pig had fucked his daughter on before calling the police. Turns out Cindy wasn't 18 after all. The pig now shares a cell with his new "boyfriend"!

I thought it was good, just use a thesaurus or something next time. You said pussy so many times that it became distracting with the amount of times you said if. I thought that maybe in time they'll stop saying it, but no, there it was time and time again.

I loved the story, with the exception, I thought there should have been a much slower build up, a nice back massage first, then some slow small erotic touching to get her used to the touch and feel. I just personally think that would have added to the over sensual overtone to the story.

I don't know if an 18 YO girl would just give it up to a much older dude just like that, unless she had a crush on him, wich could have benn the case, but it never was mention, so I don't think so, this seems more like abuse, non consensual. Then again, it's just a story, a fantasy of sorts.

Lol. Sounds like he was played by Cindy

Not bad, some of it was really hot, some of it was ‘meh’. Author really overused ‘young’ and ‘small’ as adjectives. And Cindy was a little too easy to seduce, especially if she just ditched a date for being too aggressive.

Great fuck! Did that to an ex girlfriend long ago

I liked it, fun to read but I am an older man who would like this to happen. but a fun read

5 Stars. Wondferful story, nicely paced and somewhat believable situation. I hope there will be a part 2 with Cindy eagerly returning.

Nicely done. Cindy needs to grow her confidence and then return and control Mr. Mathews.

Cindy 18, so she masterbates. I’m sure she even fingered herself and slipped the hair brush handle inside herself time and again. She was looking for more experience that evening! Next he’ll take advantage of her virgin rosebud. Go down and tongue punch her ass and puss while finger banging both until she is begging him to take her! Ever so gentle to begin with, but then back and forth in both holes!!! Yes, she is tied face down in his bed and spread wide….

Wow that's awesome I was entranced

It as pretty good. Both got off the right way,and it looks like more to come.

This is an awesome story. It reminds me of a young woman I once had myself.

Thank you.

Liked it.

flash to Cindy's room after going home as she chats with her gf.

Cindy: omg he totally bought it!

Steph: No way!

Cindy: Yep I knew he was a dirty old man lol I mean it was sooo easy, I wore that short skirt and I had my blouse unbuttoned to show my cleavage and my strappy come fuck me heels. I played the "poor little girl" to the T, I mad sure he got lots of cleavage looks, and I could feel his eyes on me as I gave him some good looks of my short skirt and legs lol

Steph: Was he "bulging"?

Cindy: OMG yes! I could literally see it growing and bulging in his pants - what a horny bastard lol

Steph: Details girl!

Cindy: He feel for the whole, "the guy I'm dating tried to get to 2nd base but I don't want to because the one time I had sex it wasn't good" story. He thought he was slick, rubbing my shoulders, telling me that it was the guy's fault and with the right guy it'll be better. So I let him massage my shoulders and he snuck a kiss on my neck and of course I let him. lol the dirty old man wasted no time after that sliding his hands to my boobs, I let him of course and let him know I liked it.

Steph: lol you're such a slut!

Cindy: Yea I know lol - he actually was good with his hands AND mouth :-). He went down on me and was really good at oral! Made me cum <giggle>

Steph: was your pussy freshly shaved?

Cindy: Smooth as a baby's bottom lol and he lapped it up like a pro - better than most older men.

Steph: So was his cock as nice as you thought?

Cindy: OMG yes! And you know how I love holding a nice meaty cock - which is what he has :-)

You know how I love to play the Miss Innocent, so I was pretty happy when he gave me the "now it's time to return the favor" line, and told me to get on my knees. You know how it gets me going when a guy gets me on my knees!

So here I am, miss innocent, on my knees, playing like - what do I do now Mr. Matthews, looking up at him with doe eyes. So he pulls it out and it's even better than I imagined! I took it in my hand and started stroking it, I thought I might give myself away but I couldn't resist feeling his cock and I wanted sooo bad to just start sucking, but the game had to play on, it had to be him "teaching" me.

I gave him the old, what do I do now? I've never put one of these in my mouth lol and he "taught" me to put it in my mouth and it'll come naturally. I can imagine what was going through his head when I pulled his foreskin back and started sucking. These guys and their obsession with conquering women, I love it lol

Reminds me of all those times on our beach vacations with our parents, being the sweet innocent girls with mommy and daddy and the boys who would get us away from the parents to "take a walk" on the beach and end up under the boardwalk and them working like hell to get sex from us, what were we like 15? You want me to touch it? OMG I never did that! Well ok, just for a little.

What? You want me to put that into my mouth? Give you a blow job, OMG that's what sluts do, No I'm not gonna do that, isn't jerking you enough? Well ok I guess I could just kiss it once. Yea your right it wasn't bad, What? Lick around the head?

What's that drop on the end? Taste it? Lick it up and lick all around the head and make it wet. Well ok, but that's it! Was that enough now? Yea it didn't taste bad, kinda salty I kinda liked it. You want me to put your cock head IN my mouth? I know I licked all around it, yea I guess it's the same, ok I'll do it.

What the fuck! You pushed my head down on your whole cock! I didn't say I would do that! No it wasn't bad, you want me to do it some more? What's blue balls? well ok I'll do it some more but you'd better not come in my mouth, promise?

I loved looking up at them and asking if I was doing it right and of course hearing them say it was perfect as they push me back down on it, and just waiting for them to tense up and start to come and feeling the inevitable pressure on my head as he thrusts up and cums in my mouth.

How funny making like I'm gagging and chocking and calling him a bastard for cumming in my mouth lol - telling him he'd better not tell anyone knowing he'll be bragging to his friends as soon as he could and seeing him and his friends looking at me and whispering about me on the beach the next day.

Little did they know that me and you sucked our first cocks when we were 13!

Steph: Yea I remember those two older guys took us driving when we were freshmen, it was the same routine but for real! I can't believe they got us to do that with them, we became sluts that night - you in the front seat me in the back sucking off these hunky football players. Loved how the word got around and all the guys started sniffing around us lol

Cindy: But we digress, I gave him a nice blow job and he recovered pretty quickly and gave me a nice fucking! He'll want more, I'm thinking of finding ways to give him blow jobs when my parents are next door and when we have time fur letting him fuck me!

Steph: I love it, maybe we can get the perv to do me too!

Beautiful to read

Two months later after Debbie pries it out of Cindy that it was that nice Mr. Matthews that knocked her up her father and uncles pay him a visit that guarantees his days of seducing sweet young things are finished, permanently.

Thank you for putting one of my dirty old man dreams into words.

I wouldn't mind getting a dick rite now just like that..fck how I want my hair to be pulled while getting to be fck from behind..fck I'm wet jst thinking about getting fck like that

I love it

Was that a real story