All Comments on 'Coming Clean'

Fantastic story, so well written and so erotic. I had a hard on from beginning to end. Please more stories, absolutely 5 stars

beautiful

Nice approach, sexy story.

I look forward to a follow up with the 2nd mother.

Excellent first story. You handled the awkward shift between past and present narrative well.

I am looking forward you to telling the story between Brenda and Brian.

Good twist at the end. More ? ? ?

Please write the next chapter.

Great story. Hungry for more!

Really enjoyed your story and hope there are many more to come!

Good story and certainly a believable one. Typos were a little distracting but did not diminish the storyline. Expecting a sequel relating Brenda's relationship with Brian. Hope this was your intention.

Nicely written and clever. Me etiting.

Nicely done.

Intelligently written.

I like stories that are plausible, this one, and it's dialog, seems like it could happen.

So, what happened to Brenda?

of course now part 2 please

Plenty of potential. Illustrated version would be great. Hopefully,Brenda seduces her son and then they could have a great foursome. nothing kike to hot milf/moms licking each other while getting plowed by sonny.

Incredibly well written

Very good keep going

Good start. I would be very interested in this continuing...

Wowwww ... what a great story and what a great idea ... loved your storyline, your characters and the words you found to describe the story. Please continue. More than 5 STARS. Thank you.

Very nice story 5 stars!!

Loved it! Can't wait to read chapter two! Five stars and a favorite point!

Words cannot describe how beautiful a story this is.

Terrific story and an exciting read. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing and creating this story. 5++ Stars. Cannot wait to read the rest.

Great story, love reading the mothers view and her love for her son, normally the stories are always the son views wanting to fuck his mother, but I really like a true love story. Can't wait to read the next chapter