All Comments on 'Coming From Behind Ch. 03-04'

With his bidness acumen, Ramona's financial backing, and Cat's help should be a well orchestrated venture. Could she be the legendary caddy? Keep up the great work, we love your stories.

Bidness, genamin, or genamins in the plural all made me think of Cal Worthington, although his diction was more correct for the west coast. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nicely developed, good dialogue and smooth plot.

you are in the lead but not 1st place yet. TK U MLJ LV NV

'Nuff said really. It belongs in non-erotic, with the first chapter.

This encompasses every category, where does the last commenter think it should be posted?

Another great story from Coaster2.

5*

This ' shot ' talk could have been VERY slow going in hands of lesser writer but Coaster2 kept the literary pilot light on, although it flickered here and there. It speaks to me being 'a man of a certain age ' that now that narrator is making a connection with Catherine, I'm wishing he could email me Ramona's numbers . LOL.

Overall rock solid read , I thank the author.

From your lack of description of Reno, I'll guess you've never golfed there. Literary license, eh? All ***** anyway.

Nice your story about some western gold courses, and how he plays them. Hope the next chapters pick up with the action.

I grew up about 10 minutes from that golf corse in gresham.