All Comments on 'Coming From Behind Ch. 11-13'

Loved the story...from start to finish...a fresh tall tale...Thanks!

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for a fantastic read. It was murder waiting for each new chapter but surely worth waiting for. I do wish to congratulate you for your background detail, be it golf as in this story, or packaging machinery as in another, or straight business management as in one of my favourites "Dexter's renaissance'. You are an accomplished author and I sincerely thank you for sharing your work freely with us. Thanks heaps.

In North Carolina are for senior golfers. White for mens. Blue for more challenge, black for the pros. Only off note I found.

and, having been through a clubhouse fire and lived through the portables, thought your use of that was spot on.

Story did lack for character development and dialog in the last chapters.

very well done.

A good, well thought out read

Your usual outstanding job.

Boyd

As usual your writing is outstanding. Great story, good plot and character development. Who doesn't wish they could chuck it all and go and buy their own Golf Course?

Great Story.....thanks for the hard work!

just pick up your ball, head to the tee box and holler FORE. TK U MLJ LV NV no stars available. mlj

A fantastic read from start to finish.

I'm not even that much into golf, but I read every word and loved it. I think I'll have to dust off my clubs ... what were the GPS coordinates that that golf course? Oh, yes. Five stars for every chapter.

And if work DOES get too intense, they're in it together!

I would have liked a bit more descriptiveness during the sex scenes. In fact, I'm pretty sure there wasn't a single sex scene that adequately described Catherine and Terry's exploits in bed. Most were really glossed over, to the point of a single sentence, i.e. their wedding night was all of a paragraph. Pages were spent on the individual golf strokes, but the sex was almost completely ignored. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

You did a great job of describing the golf tournaments. I almost felt like I was in the gallery.

Great story thank you

Yes, I am a golfer and the way you incorporated the golfing into this story was very entertaining. I enjoyed the entire story, characters, plot and settings. Thank you for a real feel-good story.

Nice story, enough sex to keep me reading and enough golf terminology that I will ever need to know.

Nothing over the top here, no BTB, no RAAC, no cheating or retribution...

Just a nice feel good story... very well written...

Excellent writing and editing. This was a very nice feel good story. Love the golf angle and as how I live in the northwest true to form. Keep up the good work. Now I will be reading the rest of your stories you are a fine author.

A great story..... plot well thought out.... would have liked his former employers to have been among the first players..... no mention of a place for a band and dancing.... Excellent 5*

Rivetted from start to finish, neglected some of my responsibilities in my enthusiasm to finish reading it. Thankyou!

This ended up pretty good. It was a great yarn. Maybe some more drama would have helped. Some man/ woman trying to steal Catherine, etc. One Great Thing......I wasn't pissed off at the end! !!!

Thank you

It was even better the 2d time!

Thistle

i enjoy the positivity, the endurance, the confidence.

and the emotion.

structure is in my opinion well placed. supported in the right place given the human dynamics at play.

good on ya

cheers

a fan!

It was great The best I have read on here. Keep up the great work

daubegirl

Carla, Ramona and Crystal should have been invited to the opening.

needs 1 more chapter. Coaster2 all ways leaves a story hanging !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a wonderful adventure of an individual who burned out on a job after 10 years, lost his marriage Then wandering and rediscovering his love and passion of golf until he found his true love and his dream that he shared with her. If you like golf this adventure had plenty of it, the little bit of drama of the fire and the recovery to have it all turn out the way they wanted was great. The end I agree needed a little bit more in this case an Epilogue detailing the life of Catherine and Terry and their future as a family would of made it complete. Other than that the story was well written in every detail. 5 stars

A very good story. It was most enjoyable and had all the aspects to make it great. Well written and a pleasure to read.

Admittedly I’m not a golf fan but a very enjoyable story 5⭐️

5*

I’ve read this story several times now and enjoyed it thoroughly each time, even though I’m not into golf. Great plotting and character development. Well done!

I don't know anything about golf and have no interest in it either, but in spite of that you managed to hold my attention through the whole story. Well done!

Exceptional love story.

5 stars

charming, good, but way too long