All Comments on 'Coming Home'

So hot! Please, please continue!!

Great story, well thought out can't wait for the next instalment.

Horny as hell. So we'll written. Hope there's more to come.

Please continue. It was just getting good.

Well written. Great detail. Enjoyable

You could leave it there, or not. In my mind, that's not the end of their story.

Great story, I want more

Please continue!!

Oh yeah... this one has it all.

Continue.. fucking, relationships, nylons, heels, dresses, impregnation..

123 stories with the same idiotic title. Easy rating of 1.

The total lack of dialogue from the son bothered me.

So he didn't begin fantasizing about his mother until his 18th birthday. How p.c.

Yes continue!

He needs to fill her cunt with his cum.

More, please. Pacing was excellent, build up was great. The only flaw was it ended too soon.

Please finish the story!!!

There has to be more, please! the story isn't finished until they are fully consumated, ending in a marriage after he gets her knocked up. That's how i would end it.

no no no no you cant build up to something and then kill it without the pay off. Having gone that far, they needed to consumate their passion, their lust, and end in a mind blowing impregnating climax. Too much story telling without the grand finale.

It was just an average story there was no sex between mother and son just him giving his mom oral pleasure and then you stopped you can't leave us hanging like this you need to continue!!!!!!! Just gave it a 3

Did not like it there was no sex between mother and son and then you quit a 2

Liked the story line and it was starting to get good and you stopped you wrote this in 21 so I take it there is no more of this coming ??? 4 stars

Make it 5 years later without any contact until a tragic accident brings them back together?