All Comments on 'Coming Home'

Chapter 2 please.

I really hope this story has more parts to it, I want to know what happens between these two characters. Great start.

There's going to be more, right?

So many unresolved issues.

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

We need some closure here but you have done a great job so far. Well written, no obvious errors.

Great story, love Jamie and Ellie.

Cant wait to see how this develops

Perceive you are on a roll. Let ur creative juices continue to flow resulting in additional chapters which I am awaiting with baited breath.

Your story line is brilliant!! I really like the way you develop the characters and I can't wait to see how they continue in your next episode. Please write it!!

FIVE STARS!!

You really need to finish this....

These are the stories that keep me interested keep up the fantastic work!!!

A great read in so many ways, such an excellent initial story line and with the talent shown to this point many chapters could easily follow without stress. BRAVO!

So beautiful, then to end it so horribly. I don't want to guess what happens next, I want you to write it.

Why oh why do writers not finish their stories. Must be cute too leave the readers hanging

Sigh

PLS finish it as fast as you can

Unfinished, getting tired of writers on this site not finishing what they start or INDICATING its a series.

Did I miss something? Why does everyone think that there's a sequel to this story? I admit that she hasn't told him about the harassment by his father. Also, there has been no outright drama but I think the title aptly fits the progression and ending of the story ("Coming Home").

Well done :-)

Please continue.

finished or not finished...

The problem is that at this point, the story ends without the resolution of feelings between Jamie and Ellie. Will they both realize that the other person loves them? Will Ellie decide to stay with Jamie? etc.

On a different note, the story is well written and draws the reader in quickly. 5 stars

Thanks for sharing.

but I look forward to seeing what the "extended version" has to offer.

Whens the next installment?! I can't wait to read more about these two.

I accidently pressed the 3 star instead of what this deserved, an awesome 5 star, not only was it exciting ;) but it had a dark but heart warming stroy as well as an amazing... Well and amazing everything else. Thnx for the story