All Comments on 'Coming Home Ch. 04'

i am really enjoying this series; it's both poignant and sexy. excellent writing!

Looking forward to more of this fine story. Thanks.

Please continue the story and keep writing! It's very good!

keep up the good work.. I hope your writing as we speak!!

more please

GREAT story!! I have one request... please don't add in the sister... It's done way too much and I love how they have their little secret.

can't wait for the next chapter!

The writing is top notch, and this is my favorite of the series. The way she teases him by suggesting that he thought of his daughters in a sexual way, and then he made her apologize by getting on her knees- just wow. That was so incredibly erotic.

I really hope you continue this with the sister finding out and joining in.

thanks for writing this

All I can say is Oh My God. This is so incredible. I never thought I could be so turned on by the concept of father daughter but I am just throbbing for more. OMG

This just gets better and better.