All Comments on 'Coming Home for Christmas'

Love it, more please. I have to know where this goes. so sexy

Great start for a series Keep going

part two please!

Very good start. Would love to see what Christmas day and Gwen's birthday holds for the family. You've already shown that Jenny seems to enjoy watching the incest. Maybe you could build on that. Just a thought.

What beautiful and heartwarming story. LOVE IT!

Loved the story so please continue it.

Loved it. There has to be at least a part 2 if not more.

So damn hot. I hope there will be more. Wonder if “mom” will stay “mom”.

Now off to see what else you have written.

I love this just the kind of story I like so more please

Yes more please

I was thinking the same as the other comment

I loved the story, and have my own personal "incest" dreams revolving around my adoption. Can't wait to read more.

Would like to see a followup to this pair. Enjoyed the story.

I love the story and well written please make sure you do some more chapters. I only wish my own sister would be like her.

A little confusion in the middle, but I muddled through. Could have been rewarded with a longer sex scene, but still 5 🌟 worth.

Bill S.

One of the best ever!!

A refreshingly different avenue taken to build the lead up to the climax. A very pleasant first, but not last, read by

this author. Five stars.

My only criticism is that the story could have used a little bit of proofreading. The story itself was fantastic, andni look forward to reading more of your writing. 5 stars.

I actually gasped when he dropped the “brother” line - so hot. Would totally love to read more about them. Thanks for sharing your story!

Excellent! I look forward to future stories.

I really enjoyed this story. Please continue with these characters.

Thank you to all those that have commented so far. I've definitely played with a few stories the last few years but never really felt the pull to the characters the way these ran around my mind in the conception period. This was really written in two different sittings.

I appreciate the feedback and I will definitely have someone proofread a bit for me next time. I usually edit and proof it myself, but it's easy to miss your own mistakes. There will be more to this as well as another story that I ahve in the works. "Bound for Home"

Thanks again everyone!

The storyline was great. The revealing was clumsy. I would much rather have had a slow build up to the sex as a brother and sister.

I'm with gnellio on this one. Plus the amnesia effects, and the resulting reasonings of the protagonists felt a bit forced and sometimes not overly logical, like they had to serve as a vehicle to drive the plot in the direction the author wanted it to end up, realistic depiction notwithstanding. Writing style was really pleasing though, errors were present but not so bad that they would deduct from that in a mayor way. A solid four star rating from me. Quite enjoyable read overall, with potential for improvement. 👍

Great story! I would love to see more of this!

Thank you. A true Christmas classic to be read each year. Leaves you with a It Wonderful Life feeling. This would make a great movie.

A well written story - wat a great way to get your memory back.

The basic idea for this story is good, but the story itself is one of the worst I've read so far. Some parts you have to read several times before you understand them, because several sentences have been joined together into one with commas.

Then the nonsense with the amnesia suddenly being gone and him not remembering step by step slowly. And then he plays the game even longer instead of saying that he remembers this or that. As his parents or sister, I'd feel like I was being made fun of.

And of course there had to be a huge cock again. But hasn't it occurred to anyone yet, that such a big piece is not necessarily comfortable for the woman? I've never met a woman who said "the bigger, the better". Or is it just the compensation for the authors own little tool?

Even two stars would be too many, if the idea hadn't been so good.

Slow burning? I would just say boring, makes little sense and fumbles thru one awkward sex scene at the end.

Needs a good editor/proof reader. I did appreciate Brutus' character though. Now...whoever thought "Die Hard" to be a Christmas movie? . . . .

Writing is solid and story is good but an editor would be helpful. No one who talks to a person 4-5 times/week skips Christmas, birthdays, and graduations. Also, the only people who have random hook-ups on Christmas don't have families. Overall this is a well written but not very sexy story. Thanks for sharing with us. 4/5

Nice story really enjoyed it thank you