All Comments on 'Coming Home to a Loving Wife'

by NDW76

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 8 years ago
You'll probably catch shit...

...from the trolls, but I liked it. Wife sharing and cock sucking. It don't get no better!

PolyLvrPolyLvrover 8 years ago
A few issues.

Overall it wasn't bad. I have no problem with the way things ended up. However; I do have a problem with how you got there.

I can see her getting Norm to lick John. But being a guy who has no problem eating is wife's cum, or even her lover's from her pussy, is a different thing than guzzling right from the tap. I'm not saying he wouldn't get to that. It just seemed to happen to fast to be plausible.

Same as for Norm getting nailed. Anal sex with a woman takes a lot of working up to. Many sessions using progressively larger implements. To have Norm take a monster dick just like that stretches credibility.

nudeinthewildnudeinthewildover 8 years ago
Perfect wife

Great stuff, it's made me very hard thank you. I liked your segue into Norm sucking the first guy's cock, maybe Jacinta could have been more helpful by showing him very close up how to lick the head and then wrapping her lips around it before letting him have a turn, but that's not a criticism. Perhaps some more description of how it felt to have a cock in his mouth, and maybe either his wife or the other dude sucking and stroking his cock too. Ultimately, I'd have preferred Norm with two cocks in his mouth and a facial to the anal scene, but I was still hard at the end. Going to read it all again now then bend up and nut off into my own mouth at the dirtiest bit. Thanks again.

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