by frankiedc
I really especially loved the specificity of this story.
Never commented on a story before but there’s a comment by what looks like a troll that should absolutely be disregarded by the author. Story telling very clear. (Two people fucking in a lumberyard on the outskirts of DC as a commuter train passes by—what more clarity do you need?) The only thing I’d change is just cut the lone in parenthetical phrase.