All Comments on 'Communication Breakdown'

by gotwood49

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fumunda cheezefumunda cheezealmost 18 years ago
Good Story

but As far as David is concerned, he might as well get rid of his clothes, put on a French maid's outfit, jack his cock, and get his cuckold horns to hang proudly above the front door.

As far as what to do after the discussion she proposes,? If David had any maleness left, he would have her things out in the yard for curbside pickup when she returns from her . If she wants strange cock so bad she has to flaunt it to her husband, then let her go square to hell. Like she said, there is not a god damned thing he can do about it anyway. What he can do though is to throw the cheating cunt out and let her be her "own person" again, not Mrs. David ----, except without him and maybe her kids too if he can get custody of them.

If he stays with her, at least he knows to never fuck her again without using protection, at least until he finds out if she starts to get sick from an STD. or gets pregnant from her outing. Also, the last thing he would ever do is kiss her or eat her again.

Very erotic though but a cheating motherfucker that would fuck some stranger on a whim without even bothering to tell her husband that she was unhappy and that he was not performing adequately for her, kind of makes a reader want to see her fucking plane crash on the way home, or better still get hit by a fucking car while getting into a cab to go to the airport.That way no other except the fucking cheat would have to die. The arrogance of this son of a bitch that is fucking her. "let's get rid of your husband." makes you have as much use for him as a fart in a space suit. This son of a bitch has no redeeming social value whatsoever. The woman had no marriage to begin with and was just a god damned slut waiting to come out anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
i liked it...

wow, that was a harsh comment. i really liked it though, i thought david acted beautifully.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
somebody had a bad day

Hot as hell! Who hasn't thought of this while on a trip away from home? You just put it into words, and extremely well, at that. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well written story

deserving a good score, regardless of personal feelings for the characters. I can relate to "fumunda cheeze" feelings.

After receiving the ultimatum from his wife, the husbands last comment should have been: "There is nothing to figure out, I made my choice, Don't bother coming home! She now had a choice, strange dick or her marriage. Wonder what she would have chosen. Maybe a sequel could tell us the outcome. How about it author, are you game?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Selfish

She has no regard for him just herself. She chose to let someone else make her feel like a woman. Husband has no right to ask her to be faithful in her eyes. What does he need her for now?

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