All Comments on 'Communication'

YOUR WRITING IN THIS STORY WENT OVER THE TOP, ONE OF THE BEST ON INCEST.GIVE US SECONDS AND KNOCK THEM UP.

Your story was fantastic. Looking for more mother son incest stories from your side. I love the way you write. Make the stories long that builds up the passion between mother and son slowly.

MORE, MORE, MORE. THAT SAYS IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!

This had the potential for being an excellent story. The idea was great - but the language was too much! Did you read - or swallow - a dictionary? I forced myself to read to the end, but by then I was skipping over chunks. And a touch of real conversation would have been better.

No, sorry, I'm not looking for more like this.

Lukas.

Story was hot as hell, but I agree with the first comment -- your language made it a difficult read. Nice to see someone with such a variegated vocabulary -- but after a while it became a bit of a slog.

Good work on the whole; the only reason I give such a low rating was the difficulty of the read.