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Slurpy29Slurpy29over 4 years ago
Enjoyable

I enjoyed reading this story. There were parts that were a little choppy, but others were very smooth. Could see this ending here or being continued. Thank you for sharing this.

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I just like to write feel-good, sexy stories. Nothing violent or uncomfortable. I'm always interested in feedback, and love to get other perspectives.

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