All Comments on 'Complicated Love Pt. 04'

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Sidney43Sidney43about 12 years ago
NIce

The story moved in the right direction and surprise, Gavin actually did the right thing in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

ann and gavin? if he were try get cassie now she wouldnt dare. he is seeing her as a possible love interest now that someone else has her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I was hoping Cassie would end up with Gavin, Chris is a selfish bastard, only realising he has feelings for her after a night of fucking a slut on his birthday? He is married, whether only on paper or not, yet it was still okay for him to go out and get laid, how would he have reacted if it had been Cassie that had done that? He needs to come clean about why the fuck he didn't come home that night, she needs to know just what kind of husband he really is, the way I see it, he will cheat again.

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertabout 12 years ago
Hmmmm

Well..............why do I think Chris' office whore may pop up pregos??? So many delicious turns this story can take. I don't believe Chris was selfish he was simply abiding by the rules of the "paper marriage". Keeping in mind no one knew where the other stood. The real selfish person in this triangle hands down is Gavin. Cassie harbored feeling for Gavin all those years and supposibly her two best friends were clueless???. Gavin commits the ultimate betrayal he repays friendship by humping her best friend. What gets me when Melissa goes abroad he has no place to rest his dick he goes into full pursuit mode for Cassie. When she was lonely and unhappy for all those years his dick did not twitch for her once. Once she starts discovering her true self now all of a sudden he wants her??? What is so truly tell-tell when he deemed there was no chance of her returning his new found feeling he then decides to run back to screw hew friend. Gavin is a H.A.M (hot ass mess)!!!!! Hurry with the update

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please don't mess this up

I really hope you don't mess up a great true love story that evolved from a paper relationship for the benefit of Chris's father and let it develope into a lasting love between Cassie and Chris.

Let Ann and Gavin follow up and all live as freinds and family

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
My Vote:

Chris & Cassie

Ann & Gavin.

And that ho Melissa can take the backseat.

The office slut is probably going to turn up preggers & cause issues. Gavin's gonna be pissed that Chris hurt Cassie & then Cassie is going to turn to Gavin for comfort causing even more problems. And after lots of drama, it will resolve w/ Cassie & Chris together.

Or so I hope. And I hope the office slut is not really pregnant because that would suck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I seriously can not wait for the next chapter!!

LogicallyInsaneLogicallyInsaneabout 12 years ago

Someone stated on the last chapter that Gavin was a jackass.. I think Chris is the real jackass here.. he's totally going to break her heart when she finds about about the office slut..

HexiseHexiseabout 12 years ago
He's gonna have some 'xplaining to do...

Enter jealous ex-fiance and slutty secretary... Gavin will probably screw up a second time. On to the next chapter for me!

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