All Comments on 'Computer Geek Hanky-Panky'

Very nice. Sweet and simple.. Makes you feel good at the end !

This is a well-considered scenario that falls down somewhat. There was so much potential and yet little of it was realised.

You clearly have a great imagination but don't rush your writing.

A little more attention to dialogue is required - the sex scenes are spoiled by comments straight from 1970s porno. I can almost see the moustache...

Still, a brave effort - thank you for sharing.

Your vivid imagination the story could be built into another chapter or two