All Comments on 'Confession'

It just seemed so unrealistic to me. Out of the blue this chick writes a dude she never talked to in HS...some 8 years later. Subsequently, she pours her heart out to him about her disasterous sex and drug life. Then as if its a healing process they screw? It was a good concept sort of...just think it might have taken a wrong turn. Great attempt!

felt exactly the same thing. the whole story is so unrealistic and cliché. not much character development either.

Kind of ok for a first attempt :) But please consider some more first hand experience of the thing you want to write about..Try your hand on stuff you really know like school trysts proms first kisses and such first ::)) what you know will soon disappear out of memory so it's not a bad idea to put it on paper.. Cheers Yoron.

Too quick of an ending. Needs another chapter!