by JoHoly
This guy is not even in a relationship any more he just paying upkeep for the slut.
to believe that your low score is due to the subject matter. That is a contributing factor, but not totally responsible.
The writing is atrocious.
If your previous story gets a 2.87, you may want to try to determine why.
Two losers...both having no self-respect, the wife being a cheap whore and he a mentally ill man...But at least it's just one marriage in the garbage...1*
A divorce of course. You left this mess unfinished. Why wouldn't he start divorce proceedings the minute he knows his wife is a whore? Is he waiting for her to pass along some nasty disease to him that he can't divorce? Who's THAT stupid? When you make your characters dumber than rocks and you let them do things insanely stupid, there's nothing sexy or entertaining about the story. This was simply awful.
1 star
You are a real sick puppy to write something like this. I can't believe I read it but you can bet I will never read any thing you write ever again.
She can humiliate him with anyone and he will stay so long as she wants him? I don't need to read stories about someone like that.
You did great here with your previous story. I'm certain this piece of shit all do equally as well.
And try not to pee on yourself when you roll over to get your belly scratched.
In other words the husband has severe mental health problems, total lack of self esteem, why is he even married?
He is portrayed as a pathetic, wimpy low life.
No possibility of redeeming this story.
You have a real knack for extracting and enhancing the tension in your stories. Please keep posting-- it seems incredibly rare that there's stories of your calibre that have strong-willed, intelligent, and independent women in them, OR for that matter men capable of advocating for equality in rational, realistic ways.
What a load of shit.How anyone can pass a good comment on this crap is beyond me.As for the sluts husband he must be brain dead to put up with it.He should have dumped her after the time and sent a video of it to daddy.
I'm going to e-mail you about perhaps doing a 3D porn comic version of this story - at the very least an "inspired by..." thing. I'm going to make it much, much filthier, but want your blessing :)
Another writer getting their jollies making hubby a perverted little boy. Of course he wants to be a cuck. Of course he wants his wife to become a whore. Isn’t that we all aspire for in our relationships? Of course No Way in Hell. Real men are not that pathetic, idiotic or stupid. In this story everyone finds out how much of a tramp she is and how much of a silly little pervert hubby is. No way that goes well unless they live in Cuckville or England
Cuck lovers in the comments, even if they deny it. Always commenting, one for sure, always there.
Not a bad story.
The guilty wanker-readers are projecting their own insecurities onto the author. They compulsively read these stories and then cast aspersions on the author and other readers to signal their own virtue. Theirs is a sickness.
Well, I can see how this could happen. I have the same name - Dennis - and there are a few parallels to my marriage. However, my wife is far to inhibited to let go, even though she conducted a 2+year affaIr with two men.
Interesting concept and I can certainly relate to the overwhelming intoxication of seeing or hearing about your partner ( in my case boyfriend) with another man. Great job.
What a pathetic lover. She is a slut, whore, and he isn't a man. This had to take place in England. No self respecting American male would let her shame him like this can't did. Offensive.
When the husband is this much of a dickless bitch and he never regains respect for himself in the least, wish the character would be killed off so stories like these could have actual closure. Ffs
It was a 5 until the end. No woman should be able to get away with that. And her wimp of a husband disgusted me. Good story, though keep it up. Just work on your Headings.
...five years and still we were having sex once or twice a month.
To me that would be a problem. Not near enough for me