by AngelaK
Makes me wish I had my own hot, slutty dughter. Hope there is more to cum!!!
Generally good in how done but suffers from the common failure of the author's use of the wrong normally used terms for some sexual items. That being "come" when any grade school kid knows it should be "cum" for orgasm/semen/sperm.
I am not a man, am not a dad, and prefer stories which leave me as a viewer. You will find yourself alienating a large amount of potential readers by framing a story in this view. It would have been much better addressing daddy himself rather than trying to force me into a role I do not wish to be in.