All Comments on 'Confessions of a Daddy's Girl Pt. 01'

by AngelaK

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clitlicker4uclitlicker4uabout 7 years ago
Very HOT

Makes me wish I had my own hot, slutty dughter. Hope there is more to cum!!!

aySolitary1964aySolitary1964about 7 years ago
Lovely!

Thank you for posting... so far so good.

More please :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
good but

Generally good in how done but suffers from the common failure of the author's use of the wrong normally used terms for some sexual items. That being "come" when any grade school kid knows it should be "cum" for orgasm/semen/sperm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Lost me trying to put me into it.

I am not a man, am not a dad, and prefer stories which leave me as a viewer. You will find yourself alienating a large amount of potential readers by framing a story in this view. It would have been much better addressing daddy himself rather than trying to force me into a role I do not wish to be in.

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