All Comments on 'Confirming Carter Bk. 01 Ch. 03'

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ChequamegonChequamegonover 8 years ago
Great Story

Really like your SG story. A few very minor typos (the printer in me) but still a great story. I like this chapter because it was shorter (3 pages) than some of the others. Don't care for chapters that get into 6-8 or more pages. Like to finish a chapter in one sitting. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Odd mix of technologies

Space travel, energy transfer and transport between universes; yet they are still using computers/ networks etc straight out of our era. There are lots of loose ends. Where does all the money for this building and equipment come from? Is Carter really making K?; that thread seems to have died.

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