All Comments on 'Connor Thomas Ch. 04'

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sirreadsalot10sirreadsalot10almost 14 years ago
Kayla and Connor

So far the dialogue between Kayla and Connor at the restaurant has been the best part of the story, in my opinion. Good dialogue can make or break a story and here,you are spot on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
One of the best stories on here!

see title

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