All Comments on 'Conrad's First Girl Ch. 02'

This story, as well as the first part, were a joy to read. Always nice when an author can use a mixture of character voices, and those of her own, to drive the story along. No laundry list of sex, here. Great detail in Elsie's emotions. And it is a complement to the author when I say that I wanted to punch that Conrad in the face -- cocky bastard. And yet I would love to be so much like him.

Can?t wait for the next part. Stories of this quality are hard to find.

One happy Deputy,

Deputy Duffy

Woven by a witty word wizard. Like the web of a spider, lured by words that tickle the mind. Then stuck till the final sentence's period. Entrapped in curiosity...Excellent tale~

The story is written with a style that creates an atmosphere to make you almost feel like you are there with them. The character development is fantastic, and even if you thoroughly dislike the pompous bastard that is using the girl - as a man, you still feel a little jealous that you can't be more like him. Very well written.

it's lovely to read a well-crafted story; it's lovelier to read one which is so deliciously sexy. conrad's behavior reminds me of the bedroom style of a few of my ex-lovers - commanding, intensely sensual, and just a bit cruel. that attitude only works for me when related to sex, but it *really* fucking works for me in that context.

well done, and thank you. please keep writing.

mmmmm...i must say that was incredibly hot! my fingers remained between my thighs the entire time till the wonderful end. I only respond like that to Dr_Mabeuse's stories. Please keep it up...I want more!

This is extremely intense. When is he going to fuck her dammit? I'm waiting! Ha ha ha...

Super, super hot, and an inspiration. Such a delicate balance between restraint and abandon... This is one of my favorites, and I've returned to it again and again, and now I have to ask: is there ever going to be a Chapter 3?

Enjoyed your story very much...good build up, excellent dialogue. Thanks.

much I saw you had written a precursor to Conrad's adventure with Devan in Changed Girl...and I read both chapters with just as much adoration for your writing style as I have with Changed GIrl. I echo a previous poster...where is chapter 3???? This just has to be finished up....I want to see how he takes Elsie.

You understand the true eroticism of nonconsent/reluctance...the psychology of it like few writers do here. Wishful Thinking, Dr. Mabeuse, GrantLee...you rate amongst my favorites now and I so hope you grant us more chapters of both tales soon.

Found this after looking up your work because I love the Changed Girl series so much. I hate Conrad, but so badly want to be at his mercy. Amazing work! Can't wait for new chapters of this and CG.

Hot!!! Oh wow, you're writing is amazing. You are truly blessed with the talent of smut.

Very, Very nice writing!! looking forward to reading more!

I love how this story is developing. Conrad is so different from other typical male leads. Definitely gets me hot..

Conrad is an unbelievable character, and your story is incredibly sensual and appealing. Please continue with it!!

Like a small bird mesmerized by the regard of the snake that is about to consume it. I was looking for some diversion and inspiration. Well written, the characters evocative, the dynamic incredibly erotic. Thank you. xantu

Love the story and would really love a ch. 03

loved the story...her submissiveness was captivating

thank you

PLEASE. CONTINUE. PLEASE.

This story is amazing! Everything about Conrad is absolutely sexy, and this is no doubt the hottest story I've read in my life! Chapter 3 please!!!!

Please continue this!!! I check back almost every month to no avail :( :(

wow it delievered what it promised amazing

in the first chapter he get into her heart by manipulating her emotions

then at her room he created an inception in her mind that he was impatient hot man into rough sex he made her feel that he was so much attracted to her that he might even rape her he made her feel desirable only to end it with a forced handjob to make her to think that he is not a complete rapist or asshole but a highly impatient guy trying to control his deires just not to hurt her and he got a successful entry into her heart impressed her

so she came to him herself the 2nd time and then he took her edge just to give her a taste what the final product will be like to make her greedy

and then the game of this conrad master at the art of humilitating seduction starts

he first lets give her his 10% of his sample kiss only that too to make her lust for his kiss

then the most teasing and halfy fulfilling nipple play ,licking and sucking only to make her beg more of his mouth attention on her nipples

and then he lets her hump and grind against his cock to let her come to ensure that he will not harm her virtue

but this humping was the key point in her actual degradation that is cockworship or behaving like a cockslut

this not so dangerous humping gave him the excuse to ask her to clean his hairy thigh,his hairy pubic region,his balls, his cock ,his peehole a through cleaning from her pussy juice by using her mouth she cleaned all his dirty regions by her touching worshipping his thighs,his pubes,his balls ,his cock and peehole all the while he mocked her by making her look into the vicious mirror perfectly angled to humiliate her degrade her till the end

he asked her to look into the mirror while lifting her skirt to show her naked ass and to finger herself while worshipping his cock and thighs all of it while acknowleding each of her steps of downfall whenever both of them looked in the mirror witnessing slutty acts she did

and then he facefucked her and threw the cum on her face while she reluctantly swallowed some he kept mocking and grinning at her humiliation

and the nail to the coffin of her humiliation when he mocked her telling she will get no love no affection no kiss no matter how much she degrades her no matter how mich she sacrifice for his love he slammed the door in her face with the further invitation of sacrificing her virtue to him in the same humiliating and degrading manner

used degraded and thrown

awsome smart methodical cassanova conrad smoothly got an unwilling pure naive girl to submit to him as a degraded bitch in heat all w/o turning into an actusl monster all at his mere voice command no force no promise at all

5 stars to both stories keep writing

5 stars

no rape ,no coercion just plain mindcontrol and mind fucking and pure bliss

loved it especially elsie detailed experience emotions fear anxiety shame right from her seduction to final degradation perfect

yummy guys like conrad they just love proving that every good innocent girl can be conqured to ruins

where can i read changed girl? please can anyone tell me