by sublocked
Interesting, but I think it belongs more in the BDSM category, not Transsexuals & Crossdressers. I think this story has more focus and interest on the BDSM than in her feminization.
My dear,
You can not let the uninitiated deter you in any way.
I love the story enough to look past the grammatical errors.
Keep writing and building.
I can't wait till Jaqueline comes into her own and realizes
she has fallen deeply in love with her Mistress.
There is a huge difference between just BDSM, and forced fem.
I think you have walked that narrow beam rather well.
My perversion says "Bring it on, more please".
Randee
RE:Yvette vs Gwen; I think it was brought to your attention as an FYI. Your stories are wonderful and any errors easily dismissed. (5)
This has been a great story. I would love another twenty chapters . It could easily go the distance. What great writing one of the best series I have read. I'm quite envious of Jackie. Please write some more
This is the best dominatrix/femdom story I've ever read. I eagerly await the next chapter. Keep up the exceptional work.