All Comments on 'Consent Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Too many excuses

For something poorly written

ElizabethOliverfieldsElizabethOliverfieldsabout 8 years ago

Interesting, but I think it belongs more in the BDSM category, not Transsexuals & Crossdressers. I think this story has more focus and interest on the BDSM than in her feminization.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5 stars

My dear,

You can not let the uninitiated deter you in any way.

I love the story enough to look past the grammatical errors.

Keep writing and building.

I can't wait till Jaqueline comes into her own and realizes

she has fallen deeply in love with her Mistress.

There is a huge difference between just BDSM, and forced fem.

I think you have walked that narrow beam rather well.

My perversion says "Bring it on, more please".

Randee

rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 8 years ago
No apology needed

RE:Yvette vs Gwen; I think it was brought to your attention as an FYI. Your stories are wonderful and any errors easily dismissed. (5)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More more please

This has been a great story. I would love another twenty chapters . It could easily go the distance. What great writing one of the best series I have read. I'm quite envious of Jackie. Please write some more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing

This is the best dominatrix/femdom story I've ever read. I eagerly await the next chapter. Keep up the exceptional work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Phenomenal

job with these characters!

Anonymous
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