- Non-Erotic
- Consequences
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I'd like to thank Anomic, Todger65 and everyone else that helped out. As always, it's very much appreciated.
Looking for something else to read? When We Were Married is a huge story with multiple chapters and arcs. It's part of it's own little genre in the Loving Wives category and the author is extremely talented.
https://www.literotica.com/s/when-we-were-married-ch-01
- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoThere
There's no doubt you are a very good writer. You are able to make the reader experience emotion but your experiment with "non-linear" timeline was very hard to follow. It made the reader, me, work very hard to "follow" the storyline. Maybe that was the purpose?
Anonymous10 months agoHuh??!!
He cheated. Her Cancer?
She cheating with who?!
Totally lost me so dislike!!!
Anonymous10 months agoThe story was quite choppy. More detailed explanation needed under each "year". Got a little confused with the "hurry up and make this a one pager". The subjects could have been explained in regards to their reasons for feeling as they portrayed their grudges. I felt you touched the surface of each character, and the meaty part of each of there existence was fallen to the waste side.
