All Comments on 'Consequences Ch. 11'

And very hot. Worthy of five stars.

sorry what a waste of time to write a story like that

Didn't like this story much. Husband was apig if you ask me. What was the point of this story

Boring--redundant.

Maybe the worst piece of shit in all of Literotica. lost any chance of a hardon. Wife may sue for alienation of affections

To long to many men..

You ended it badly. There are way too many unanswered questions remaining.

This is a great series but we want to hear about the next day and the daughter.

They need to get together.

I can't see the husband staying with her. She really is a whore and no one respects her, not even her own daughter. What will happen to the husband and daughter?

Good story, but needs more of a conclusion.

Good story but definitely needs a better conclusion

With all the loose ends in this story, my mind is compelled to imagine what happened in the marriage, with the daughter, and how the "friends" treated her afterwards. From the way the wife was treated throughout the story I imagine that her life was hell afterwards; whether she stayed with Frank or whether he divorced her, after forcing her to whore herself to his friends. Does Frank ever have to answer for doing his daughter, or does he continue to get a free pass? The "friends" surely treated the wife with as much respect as a whore usually gets, whenever they saw her in the future.

Your writing is hot. But the ending left too many questions that implied really bad outcomes. That overpowered anything hot that this story had previously made me feel.

it didn't need a definitive ending. we already know because of the characters.

she remains a mousy and subservient wife. he broke her will power to fight him.

because on some level she REALLY enjoys the treatment she's getting. she hates it too, but her lust over rides. otherwise she'd have never cheated to begin with. but all her 'hear me roar' and 'yas queen, slay' has been evaporated. he's her master, her husband, and a source of guilt.

his daughter will continue to fuck him for years to come. and i doubt frank is gonna cry over bedding other women. what can his wife even say at this point? that's why his 'demands' ended. they never really ended. but he no longer needs to hold anything over her head, she'll oblige him now. that's the title of the story....consequences. as in plural. her life will never go back to what it was. what she did was pure evil, and this is honestly the best she can hope for.

Well, of course her husband will divorce her even after saying that after tonight they will talk about staying together. He will continue fucking his daughter and eventually allow his friends to fuck her as well. His wife will be kicked out on the streets and will have to turn tricks to make due. Of course his friends will drop by from time to time to keep her company. Maybe her daughter will be pimped out to some frat parties, migrant camps, and homeless shelters. Would have liked a better ending but it has been way too long to continue.

Liked the story, being a women found the idea of that kind of use oddly very erotic. I also found myself thinking about her and the daughter together with him and each other.

Liked it very much except for the calling her names,i would have loved for my wife to fuck me and 4 of my friends all night long,me and one friend has fucked her for hrs on several occasions and I know she could handle a couple more,i can cum twice and still be hard when we do it and we both love it,never had hotter times than that!

My mother inlaw was staying with my wife and me told my wife want your mom live with us so us three do threesome every day she agree said to me what about yours that want to fuck me every daytold still happen plus your mom will be gangbanged every day we talked to her mom about living with us us three sharing same bed that you and me be fucking us doing threesome plus my friends be gangbanging you every day letting use you pump their sperm in you told her your daughter got knocked up other dayshe carrying black kid inside her told her mom your daughter is gangbang whore only let black guys fuck her your going to do same being stretched in cunt and asshole told her guys are here now 20 black guys came in grabbed mother inlaw ripped clothes rammed her lower holes she screamed yelled told her your slut whore now she had extra large cock in her cunt other in her asshole told rip in half wife told guys rape cunt