All Comments on 'Consequences of Pranking My Sister Ch. 02'

Nice, i enjoyed something sensual for a change.

Dialogue is a bit stilted, doesn't feel very natural, but the story is still interesting overall.

Gotta love a good Jasperspen story. Thanks.

Great work! Super-hot. I like a slow-burn story like this. I’m excited to see where you take it.

Enjoyed both parts of the story, well done and more please

Excellent!

Dam, Chris wasn't the only one that was hard and leaking. That was some of the sexiest and arousing sex I've read in a while. The hesitation and slow buildup, going just a little bit further, just makes it all the more erotic. I'm thinking that his sister enjoys it as much as he does, lol. Hope to read another chapter when they do it again. Five stars.

Very good story, keep it going don't stop now. Loved it 5++ stars!!!

I like the tenderness between them, I could feel the love, and the attraction.

Great story!

Really like the pace youre writing, keep going!

Sweet, and hot! Pacing is perfect, and we care about both characters. Conflict, resolution, conflict, resolution.

More would most certainly be welcome. Very welcome.

Wonderful story of sibling love. Funny how it was pranks when younger, too turn to full blown love and sex was adults. Very well written making this an enjoyable read. Five Stars. Please continue their saga.

Wonderful story of love and compassion not usually seen in today's stories. I'm anticipating further chapters of your writing of this tender love story!

A beautiful story of blossoming sibling love! Thank you!

Sarahxxxxx

more please!

Another author that bailed before writing any sort of conclusion !!!!

You have a magical way of describing the love they have for each other. 100 stars!

There has to be more. So much passion. Only possible between brother and sister.

keep going, these love can't be separated, can't be cheated, or shared... It's so pure...

Please continue this series.

please continue .. very hot stuff

Hot, hot, hot. I can see Julie lying there in her naked glory. She is so beautiful and HOT. Great story and good writing.

Julie is so hot. I wish it was me between her legs. Great story and writing. You created a lot of anticipation.

I really liked where this love came from. It's very well written and too hot for words. Please write more. Much more.

Very loving and erotic. This feels like the beginning of something beautiful. Both of them realise they have deep feelings for each other. I would love to see where this goes. I hope this isn't the end for this series.

I liked the first part a lot but this one is great too. I like how they shared their feelings and I really hope you make another part.

Great story. Easy 5/5.

It’s a shame that we never heard what happened with Julie and Chris? Did they move on without each other, did make a go of it after they moved away from the parents? We will never know sadly.

Excellent part 2..

My younger brother tells me that I was more confident than the big sister in this story.

I guess I just knew what I wanted...LOL

Hopefully, Jasperspen will come back with another chapter.

He is an excellent author

Great story my 2nd read!! Need to continue though. 5 starts a 2nd time!!!

I love the way you describe their emotions. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

You should really add to this series!!! All sorts of direction(s) this could go!!!! 2nd or 3rd read!! Good Job!!

This two-part story ranks somewhere at the top of the hundreds that I have read on this site. The system restricts me to give a maximum of five stars, whereas I would like to give at least double that. Excellent writing in terms of simple story, situation build up, language, writing style, the thoughts going on in their minds, the psychology and of course the description of the action between the siblings. This could have come under 'Erotic Couplings', too. Excellent writing. Thanks. Please don't come with a part 3. Ending of part 2 is great and has left us readers to indulge in imagination.