by Quixerotic1
Very interesting, would like to read more of this world, it seems that you have a lot more to tell us.
I really hope this isn't going to die on the vine this soon, you've got a great little saga starting and I want to tag along and see how it all comes together.
Just being a bit nitpicky here, but in the third paragraph of the beginning, you said that making two mistakes would make someone cough up three gallons of blood. The only thing is, people (at least on this planet) only have about 1 to 1 1/2 gallons of blood.