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All Comments on 'Consolation Prize'

by PHL1013

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
zzzzzzzzzzzzz!

Borrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrring!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Author's Name - PHL1013, or PG13?

Absolutely nothing to this story. Nothing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It's a bit brief

but I liked what there was of it, are you going to continue with more chapters ( longer ones )?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad but needs work

You need to develop the characters and the plot

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